tictac420
Thu Mar 7 12:25:42 2013
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| My Review of Dangerous Questions by
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| Although i am not in a marriage i found this rather humouring. i looked at when my parents were together and my goodness it sums in all up. to win, there surely is no way. |
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tictac420
Thu Mar 7 12:22:22 2013
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| My Review of Not Another Fairy Tale by
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| i enjoyed reading this. although it was short some of the best poems are. i think everyone should read this piece of work. i loved that although it was short it has so much meaning and has so much to say. I cant wait to read more of your work keep it up!! |
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tictac420
Wed Oct 31 17:02:37 2012
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My Review of The Ocean I Love by
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| in my opinion i think the ocean is one of god greatest creations where it hold so much beauty and keeps so many secrets from the world. The ocean brings people together |
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tictac420
Wed Oct 31 17:00:02 2012
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| My Review of Times Long Gone by
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To be yourself tell your world who you really are.
like the saying goes
the people who mind dont matter and the people that matter dont mind |
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tictac420
Wed Oct 31 16:51:50 2012
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| My Review of brothers by
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| this was a very well written piece of work that you obviously can tell came from the heart. You are right when you say you truely love them even though it doesnt show. I believe everyone with siblings do the very same thing. I hope your brothes get to read this since it shows them how much you care. Keep up the beautiful writing. |
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tictac420
Wed Oct 31 16:48:39 2012
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| My Review of Flesh by
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| i have read some dark poems but this one was very different. It did have a halloweeny feel. Gave me some goosebumps for sure. Glad its not your history |
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tictac420
Wed Oct 31 16:43:20 2012
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| My Review of Loneliness by
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| i liked this piece of work because it is true. not to just you but everyone at some point in their life. Loneliness can be a friend cause it can open you mind to the silenced thoughts of god. |
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tictac420
Sun Aug 12 16:25:41 2012
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| My Review of THIS TOO SHALL PASS by
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i absolutely enjoyed this piece. I believe you thought up a well piece of work. This poem is just wonderful because everyone and i mean everyone can relate to this piece in some shape or form.. I hope to read many more of your creative work.
keep up the splendid work.
-Alisha |
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tictac420
Wed Jun 6 12:46:34 2012
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| My Review of Gracious Confrontation by
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I have read many spiritual poems on this website some i liked some i didnt. but this one i must say is rather impressive and very intriguing.
i do enjoy this part:
I am a soldier - a warrior of thy light.
I will conquer thy night and make it bright
Alone I will stand face to face,
battling those demons with all thy grace!
i find that the whole poem shows courage and confidence but that part I defineatly enjoyed the best. Keep up the wonderful writing
- Alisha |
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tictac420
Wed May 16 21:47:29 2012
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| My Review of In YourArms by
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i found this piece of work rahter lovely and warming. It was very inspiring and made me shiver. I thought it was well thought out and that you did a wonderful job. I will be happy to read any of your pieces of work anytime. you did a wondeful job, keep writing.
-Alisha. |
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tictac420
Wed May 16 18:18:26 2012
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| My Review of Woe by
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There is not much to this poem you wrote.. I do enjoy the meaning but wish there was more to it. maybe in the near future i hope you will come back and add on to it. Other than that i think it was rather intelligent and i cannot wait to read more of your work
good job!!
Alisha |
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tictac420
Tue May 15 12:45:51 2012
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| My Review of You Make by
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| I like the style of write you have used in this piece of work. It is rather interesting if i do say so myself. I find it rather interesting at how people can have a big affect on ones life.. Good job keep it up. |
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tictac420
Tue May 15 12:24:29 2012
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| My Review of how is this to work by
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| I find this piece of work rather interesting, i do like the use of repetition that yo have used. I find i like this poem because i believe that in some point in someones life they feel the things you have written down. But as we get older memories fade.. Keep it up i would like to read more. |
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tictac420
Sat Mar 17 19:32:35 2012
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| My Review of Can You Hear The Cry? by
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| I find i enjoyed this poem a lot and i liked the use of repitition. The meaning of the poem is very powerful because not many people realize what goes on in the lives of other people around them. Many people in the world are blind to see what happens around them especially most of the things you have said in this poem. I think you have grasped the meaning well. |
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tictac420
Mon Mar 12 14:21:06 2012
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| My Review of Where Are You Now by
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| all i have to say is WOWW!!! This poem gave me goosebumps. i hope that this poem is not personal becauss no one should make someone fell like this. I like your style of writing and hope to read more of your work. If this is personal i think you should go and read my poem "If you decide" |
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tictac420
Mon Mar 12 14:05:00 2012
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| My Review of Depression!! by
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| I really enjoyed reading this poem, even though it could have been more flowing in some places i find that this poem was very well done, I think you grasped the meaning of this poem very well. I hope to read more work from you soon |
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tictac420
Thu Mar 8 19:39:16 2012
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| My Review of Broken Hearted. by
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| This i find is a wonderful piece of work. I enjoy the use of words you put together and the meaning of this poem. I enjoy your style of writing and cant wait to read more of your work in the near future! Keep it up this is wonderful!! |
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tictac420
Tue Mar 6 15:45:38 2012
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| My Review of You Make Me Feel Like a Fool by
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| i really enjoyed reading this poem. i found it very well written and well flowing. I really like the meaning you put into this piece of work. I am looking forward to reading more of your work in the future. Keep it up its brilliant!! |
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tictac420
Tue Mar 6 15:29:44 2012
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| My Review of Nature's Wheel by
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| I really enjoy your writing very much. I find your writing very well spoken and thought out. I am always surprised with the work that you have done, im excited to read more!! Keep it up |
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tictac420
Tue Mar 6 15:21:42 2012
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| My Review of Not gonna give in by
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| When i started to read this i realized this was short, even though this was short i did see a lot of meaning. I enjoy that it shows that theres no giving up in whatever manner this is about. I would like to read more of your wonderful work that you have written. Keep it up!! |
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tictac420
Tue Mar 6 13:30:38 2012
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| My Review of Six Feet Under by
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| this i find is a very sad poem that brang tears to my eyes. Even though you have written so little it bring a lot to my mind. i do not know if this is a personal poem but what you have said seems very deep. I will enjoy to read more of the work you have yet to come. Keep it up!!! |
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tictac420
Tue Mar 6 13:27:03 2012
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| My Review of helpless victim by
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| i really enjoyed reading this piece of work. i find it to be very inspiring as to show that many people that dont have much in this world enjoy the little things that they are giving. i am excited to read more of your work and look forward to it. Keep up the good work. |
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tictac420
Tue Mar 6 13:22:36 2012
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| My Review of On Getting Older (2012) by
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| i have realized from the poem that you have written that i am now willing to be old. i shall not be scared to grow up any longer. Your poem has really inspired me that no matter how old you get your dream can still begin. |
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