donpatch Tue Feb 14 22:04:05 2012 Helpful: My Review of Shadow by TheDoctress great very good, i like your writing alot so keep on writing visible donpatch Tue Feb 14 15:27:03 2012 Helpful: My Review of THE MIND AT DUSK by Galacticbeam good , verey good. You showed the diffrence beetween light and dark and why we choose one over the other or something like that i could be wrong(often am) well that was realy good so keep on writing. visible donpatch Tue Feb 7 14:55:26 2012 Helpful: My Review of Madness Of My Mind by TheDoctress very good indeed, it was realy good for the first thing you posted. i thought its waw sweet and way better than i could ever wriigh. i enjoyed this alot so keep on wrighting. visible donpatch Tue Feb 7 14:42:38 2012 Helpful: My Review of You Are A Flower by wordsmagic100 nice short sweet and simple. it was realy good keep on righting visible donpatch Tue Jan 31 14:55:34 2012 Helpful: My Review of If I had Wings by in_loving_memory this was so beautiful. i too wish i could escape some times and have writen about it. You feel like you just have to escape if its you feel traped , board or could be becuse of people but its allways good to dream if not then this poem would not be here. Great job realy good i hope you keep writing. oh and spot light for shrue visible donpatch Tue Jan 24 14:45:29 2012 Helpful: My Review of running out of hope. by snulf i can see you been through a lott and thats why we wright poems to exspres are feelings. alot of the best poems are from persnal tragdity thats what someone told me once, its sad but true. keep on wrighting visible donpatch Tue Jan 24 14:34:38 2012 Helpful: My Review of Bed of Roses by Whiskurz master pice realy realy good it was sad but also buetiful. real this was a nice poem very good. keep on writing visible donpatch Tue Jan 24 14:29:45 2012 Helpful: My Review of Ghosts and Wishes by Soullessone dont listen to them but still i liked it alot has a haloween vibe. even thoug youtook a lot of lines form a band i dont even listen to it was good. keep on wrighting. visible donpatch Tue Jan 17 14:35:37 2012 Helpful: My Review of Who Is This? by dream1dancer great this was realy good kinda remined me of lord of the rings some but still it was sad and deep. it was great so i hope you keep on writing. visible donpatch Thu Dec 15 12:29:34 2011 Helpful: My Review of Complete! by MusicMyLife tis a was realy good and lets hope are own angels are to help us out. keep writihng visible donpatch Tue Dec 13 14:10:26 2011 Helpful: My Review of Crimson/Gold by Vashthestampede0 great i agree love dose not mean you have to go through pain but you do have sometims though. Everyone needs to look through diff angles to realy have a undersatning. great write. visible donpatch Tue Dec 13 12:38:48 2011 Helpful: My Review of Forces of Life by DarkestHeart short too the point. very good but also deep i think. like it alot keep on writing visible donpatch Tue Dec 13 12:35:41 2011 Helpful: My Review of Broken Dreams by broken_boy13 very sad and deep its great dont see anything wrong ethier. it was prefect. so keep on writing. visible donpatch Tue Dec 13 11:08:43 2011 Helpful: My Review of Fate by aprettyflower great This was just beutiful realy nice i realy liked it alot. it was great so keep on writing. visible donpatch Mon Dec 12 14:35:47 2011 Helpful: My Review of Born Again by ENESCE great write, i beleve i felt simearlar when i was babtised, indeed you are born agin to serv ou lord jeus . i look forword in readin more of your writes. visible donpatch Mon Dec 12 14:30:18 2011 Helpful: My Review of Old Blue by billhealey70 sad love Soo sad but heart warming. another great wright realy good. I have a dog with cancer that might come back so i feel conected in the way to this poem. loved the poem keep on wrighting. visible donpatch Mon Dec 12 11:35:25 2011 Helpful: My Review of A Point of LIght by billhealey70 great clear imagery and showed no matter what thier that lite to guid you back no matter how dark it is. Realy good its aspot light for me. keep on writing, visible donpatch Mon Dec 12 11:29:51 2011 Helpful: My Review of Blanket of Darkness by wolfie445 realy good this was realy deep and sad im probley gonna raed it acople more times. I realy love this peom and it sound a littel simealr how i writ but your writing is better. i realy loved the feeling you pured in to this. great write. visible donpatch Wed Dec 7 15:01:14 2011 Helpful: My Review of The Wings of Time by clippedwings great short but i dont realy care about that. it was realy good and had a clear message. keep on writing and take care visible donpatch Wed Dec 7 14:52:29 2011 Helpful: My Review of A bad dream by broken_boy13 great its good to share your feelings and no im not a physcaitrist. It did kinda scare me thogh. poems from are heart are allways the best in my opion. keep on writing. visible donpatch Fri Dec 2 12:42:49 2011 Helpful: My Review of Nothing Real by Music great we all have times when we dont have anything to inspire us to write but this case not having anything inspiring inspired you. great write. visible donpatch Tue Nov 29 12:31:49 2011 Helpful: My Review of Beloved by saiom too short!! Its good but too short now if it was a hiku then id be okay with it so i would try that. its is great just next tim make it longer. keep on writing. visible donpatch Fri Nov 18 14:45:44 2011 Helpful: My Review of Find Me by ornella great It was a realy deep and dark poem. Alot of people recently have been saying how we shouldent write peoms like this(dark ,sad and other like those) and that we should write happy pems but were just expressing are feelings. Besides alot of peopel like these kind of poems(like me!). It was realy good, keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!!!! visible donpatch Thu Nov 17 12:40:29 2011 Helpful: My Review of Faded Memories by ornella SAD It was so sad that he lost her only a after the week that they met. It had a strong clear message about trying to forget the tragedys in life that has happen to us. In my opion you write what you want to write not evryone wants happy poems some people perfer sad ones like this one. So i dont think the reason people arent reading isent becuse its sad besides thats what i mostly read and mine allways gets loats views even though thier sad. It was verey good keep on writing what you want no mater what people say. visible donpatch Fri Nov 11 12:30:58 2011 Helpful: My Review of Secure by Music Great This was realy good i could see this as a song so it would be cool if you were to make it longer and do that but its good as it is. It was short but had a strong message. Keep it up!! visible

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