garyD43113
Thu May 23 08:20:32 2013
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| My Review of No strings attached- part 2 by
Person101
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| I must admit it is not one of your best but not bad either. I do believe in the story you were talking to your inner being. We all have to make a choice at times it can be hard. Just remember a guy is out for a conquest and then leaves. A girl may be left with a baby and a reminder of a mistake for life. I believe your love is a gift only to be given to your husbad. You have to remember the differance in our ages. Differant times differant ideas. |
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garyD43113
Thu May 23 08:19:33 2013
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| My Review of No strings attached- part 2 by
Person101
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| Not bad |
| I must admit it is not one of your best but not bad either. I do believe in the story you were talking to your inner being. We all have to make a choice at times it can be hard. Just remember a guy is out for a conquest and then leaves. A girl may be left with a baby and a reminder of a mistake for life. I believe your love is a gift only to be given to your husbad. You have to remember the differance in our ages. Differant times differant ideas. |
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garyD43113
Thu May 23 07:48:59 2013
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| My Review of A poem for you (whoever you are) by
Person101
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| Very Good |
| Just be carfull in life, it is to easy to fall in love with the wrong person. One love will never let you down is your love of writing! |
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garyD43113
Thu May 23 07:44:35 2013
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| My Review of My Story by
Person101
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| Very Good |
| Yes, Our friends are a very special part of our life and children can be very abusive. |
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garyD43113
Thu May 23 07:27:56 2013
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| My Review of prank on words by
Person101
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I enjoyed it very much. All I can say in dad's defence is... OOPS! Take care my friend.
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garyD43113
Tue May 21 08:24:18 2013
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| My Review of Master by
caitlynjade
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You conjoured up many thoughts. Sounds kinky and makes me wonder if there are really people who enjoy being dominated in this fashion or even more extreme. Good write keep up the work. Great imagination.
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garyD43113
Fri May 17 10:09:42 2013
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| My Review of Dont bother me by
rezothegreat
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| Strange LOL |
| Not bad writing, but a strange outlook on life. Keep writing it is a window to the soul!! |
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garyD43113
Mon Apr 8 13:03:37 2013
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My Review of Little Boy Blue by
 Firewalker
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Needs work  |
| Never start a sentence with "And" check spelling and punctuation. I also experanced some of the things you spoke of. I wonder sometimes if maybe it would help some of the attitudes of todays children. I am not talking about the beatings but the spankings. |
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garyD43113
Sat Aug 11 21:32:27 2012
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| My Review of One Dozen Roses. by
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fair  |
| I like the subject but a couple of spelling errors and a bit clique. If that is how you spell it LOL. No I am not perfect either. take care my friend. |
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garyD43113
Sat Aug 11 21:22:35 2012
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| My Review of Carnations by
poetichuggybear1
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| Good piece |
| Never again will (be) the drivers be so wreckless. Did you intend this? other vary good. |
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garyD43113
Tue Jun 12 08:10:09 2012
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| My Review of Bipolar by
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Very good write  |
| It seems to me there is a lot of this going around and it affects an awful lot of people in the world today. I will tell you this hits close to home. |
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