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JudyBall
Mon Dec 15 08:09:42 2014

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My Review of Choice by javick
Excellent
So well written and such an emotional piece.
When we are heavy hearted we want to move on but we don't want to leave certain memories behind and fear their loss.
Are we willing to forget some things in order to lessen the pain of the present?
What lies ahead if we proceed to move on to tomorrow.
Will it bring more pain or will it bring happiness we seek?
What a great piece this is.
Bravo my friend.SL for sure.
God Bless,
JB
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JudyBall
Thu Dec 11 21:44:47 2014

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My Review of Oh where are you my sweet love by dionysos
Very Sweet and heartfelt
This is lovely my friend.
Wonderful emotion and great expression.
Hope you are feeling better.
I've been a bit under the weather myself so I can identify with you.
God Bless and thanks so much for the kind words on my "Think On These Things".
JB
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JudyBall
Thu Dec 11 21:35:13 2014

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My Review of Dena's No 'Y' by javick
Well Done.
On both levels.
Although HE know WE know that He knows it is just as important to say it anyway.
You have to figure we are made in His image and so just as it hurts us not to ever hear "I Love You" it hurts Him too.
You have to TELL Him.
It's like the old saying goes: If You Love Someone, Tell Them Before You Lose Them."
Loved this my friend.
Great Job.
Encore.
God Bless,
JB
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JudyBall
Thu Dec 11 11:21:27 2014

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My Review of 002. My Cat by Profanisaurus
CRIKEY! CLOSE ONE!
As my fave Aussie naturalist, Steve Irwin used to say.
Glad the rabbit got away with his skin in tact.
I have two cats and I hate it when they catch something like a bird.
So far no rabbits have run a-foul of their claws.
Mostly mice, moles and bats.
Great job here with really good imagery.
God Bless,
JB
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JudyBall
Thu Dec 11 11:14:23 2014

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My Review of FADING FACES by failte
What a poignant piece
this is.
There is so much emotion in this writing.
So much of your heart here.
I wish I could reach out and hug away your pain even for a moment.
Beautifully written and well expressed as always my friend.
God Bless and thanks so much for the kind words on my recent prayer.
SL
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JudyBall
Thu Dec 11 09:58:47 2014

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My Review of A Dance with The Lord Jesus Christ by roger
Loved It!
This is wonderful my friend.
Love the way you praise Him in all His glory.
I know He loves this.
Bravo my friend.
God Bless,
JB
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JudyBall
Thu Dec 11 09:52:13 2014

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My Review of The retreat. by jessicaRose
Well Said
He is our courage, our wisdom and our strength.
The Bible tells us He is a very present help in time of trouble.
Great job here.
Let us praise Him together.
God Bless,
JB
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JudyBall
Thu Dec 11 09:46:21 2014

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My Review of Why tell me why by dionysos
Very True
Sometimes I think the only ones fit to inherit the earth are the animals because they are the only ones who have remained as God intended them to be.
The Bible tells us that Jesus said "The Meek Shall Inherit The Earth."
What is meek about Mankind?
To my way of thinking that just leaves the animals.
I hope to be able to go to Heaven and maybe He will allow me to take care of His animals.
Great write my friend.
God Bless,
JB
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JudyBall
Tue Dec 9 16:03:53 2014

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My Review of Hurricane by DeviantWriter88
WELL DONE
And beautifully spoken.Life in general can often seem like a hurricane if you don't have some kind of order in your life.
Every part of your life must be lived with some kind of goal in mind.
Otherwise it will all be helter skelter and you will never accomplish anything.
From work to play to romance, it all must be taken very seriously because life is not a game. It's serious business.
Well done.
God Bless,
JB
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JudyBall
Tue Dec 9 14:18:12 2014

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My Review of The truth will out by dionysos
I totally agree
The Lord is coming back a lot sooner than we think.
The signs of the times are all around us and He grows weary of giving us time to clean up our act.
It is wise to put your house in order while we have time.
Great piece with a good moral to it.
God Bless,
JB
PS Thanks so much for your kind words on my "A Christmas Story Told By The Dog".
Please take a peek at "One Year Later" it is the sequel to the first one.
Thanks bunches.
JB
Am not online as much as I want to be lately.
My puter died and I have to borrow one when I can.
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JudyBall
Tue Dec 9 10:48:25 2014

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My Review of LIES LIES AND MORE DAM LIES by dionysos
Amen and Amen my friend.
I have said it before and I'll say it again, the government is headed for Genocide.
They want to get rid of the common man and have a world full of "The Elite".
Trouble is once they have gotten rid of all the "little people" who will there be left for them to govern?
I notice in the papers that William has stepped aside for his father to take over the throne once the queen steps aside or dies.
OH NO! If Camilla gets to be queen look out WORLD!
You think she is insufferable now, just wait.
What I don't understand though is this.
Wallace Simpson could not be queen and her husband had to give up the throne or not marry her because she was a divorced woman.
So how does Camilla get away with it?
Not only is she a divorced woman she is directly responsible for the failure of Charles first marriage to Diana. She is also a booze soaked, psychopathic social climber.
Surely they jest.
No offense my friend.
I have always admired Queen Elizabeth and LOVED Princess Diana.
Maybe that's why I can't stand Camilla who has made so many outright attacks against Kate.
Great job here.
SL for sure.
God Bless,
JB
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JudyBall
Tue Dec 9 10:38:55 2014

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My Review of NO SENSE AT ALL by failte
You tell 'em , Sister!
I do so totally agree.
This is the absolute worse government the U.S. has ever had. BAR NONE!
God Bless and a BIG S.L.
God Bless,
JB
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JudyBall
Tue Dec 9 10:33:02 2014

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My Review of #2: Beauty and the Blessed by Jade_Mary
Yes Indeed
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
No one can appreciate the wonder and beauty around them or that another posses if they only wish to POSSESS that beauty themselves, to own it.
That is what kills it.
Jesus Himself was gifted and the Only Begotten Son of God and He was not only envied He was feared for they knew who He really was in their Heart of Hearts.
And you know what Mankind does with what he does not understand or fears, he gets rid of it.
Great job here my friend.
God Bless and thanks so much for the kind words on my "One Year Later".
Glad you enjoyed it.
JB
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JudyBall
Mon Dec 8 17:30:34 2014

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My Review of RE POST ***KNOCK, KNOCK 'WHO'S THERE?' by kitty
Ooohoohoohoo!
This one was a good one for Halloween!
Too bad I missed it then.
This is a time for cheer not fear.
Still it's a good piece my friend.
Thanks so much for sharing and for the kind words on my "A Christmas Story Told By The Dog".
Please take a peek at my "One Year Later" which is the sequel to the first one.
Thanks bunches and Merry Christmas my friend,
JB
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JudyBall
Mon Dec 8 17:17:40 2014

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My Review of CASSI GETS THE CHINA by failte
As Well She Should
Seems if one gets Mom's china then the other should get yours.
This is so sweet.
I have two sets of dishes.
My favorite being the iron stone set.
I use it all the time but my fine china never gets used.
I told my daughters that I am going to let them fight over my glass ware when I go just for revenge.LOL
I have lots of special collectors items and crystal and porcelain pieces.
Of course I will leave certain special pieces to each in my will but tell the they can just fight over it because I have a sick sense of humor.lol
This is a special piece that shows your love of your grandchildren.
Bravo my friend.
God Bless and please take a peek at my "One Year Later" which is the sequel to the first Christmas Story. I just thought it would be good to post them together.
Thanks Bunches my friend.
JB"rose"
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JudyBall
Mon Dec 8 17:08:02 2014

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My Review of 001. My Dog by Profanisaurus
Too Cute
I notice your dog is a Blue Tick American Coon Hound.
My husband has a Red Tick American Coon Hound named Scout.
He's quite the boy and a real clown.
I wrote a poem about him called "Just A Hound".
We really love him and he is so much fun.
Great job here my friend,
And she is a fine looking dog.
God Bless and thanks so much for the kind words on my "A Christmas Story told By The Dog".
Please take a peek at the one just below it called "One Year Later".
It is the sequel to the first one.
JB
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JudyBall
Mon Dec 8 09:12:17 2014

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My Review of Destiny or Fate by DestinationDeep
Well Said
Our life very often is the result of decisions we make.
It is neither destiny nor fate but our own choices that we make and we must be willing to accept the responsibility for those choices.
It is not the fault of some errant parent but ourselves who are to blame for what we make of ourselves once we have become adults and make our own decisions.
An excellent piece my friend.
Bravo. SL for this.
God Bless,
JB
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JudyBall
Mon Dec 8 06:37:25 2014

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My Review of The Green by Hansi
Very Emotional Piece
There is so much feeling in this one my friend.
You really have a talent.
The imagery here is lovely but there is an overall feeling of sadness here.
An aloneness.
When we lose someone who means a lot to us we are left with this feeling.
We tend to return to places we shared with this person who is no longer with us just to feel close to that person once more.
great job. SL
God Bless,
JB
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JudyBall
Mon Dec 8 06:27:45 2014

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My Review of A Butterfly by Hansi
Beautiful
My friend it has been a long time since I was on line because my computer died and I have to borrow one when I can for now until I get another one.
I loved this.
It is so creative and such wonderful imagination.
Great job and deserving of the SL.
God |Bless and thanks so much for the kind words on my "My Italian Grandma".
JB
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JudyBall
Mon Dec 8 05:50:05 2014

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My Review of American Masterpiece by deeprdestination
Hmmmmmmm
This is written very "tongue-in-cheek" and with a lot of imagination.
Lots of good humor in it.
Really good imagery.
Have to tell you though I'm from the deep south in the states and though there are some that are on the deep stupid side most have a lot of common sense.
Common sense is something that seems to be a disappearing virtue.
I have quite a few little poems on my list that are written in the same way as country western songs.
I think you would get a kick out of them.
Nice job here.
God Bless and thanks so much for the kind words on my "One Year Later".
I should post the first one so you would be able to know the whole story.
Sorry it took so long to get back to you but my puter died and I have to borrow one when I can.
JB
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JudyBall
Mon Dec 8 05:36:10 2014

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My Review of "True Gold" by Valentine
Excellent
Loved this.
It's so true that only God can fill that "empty spot" we all are born with.
That's because that spot was meant for \Him and \him alone.
Only He can fill it.
Once you accept Him as Lord of your life the spot is filled and you feel whole.
There is a satisfaction that only He can give you.
Wonderful work and deserving of the Spotlight.
God Bless and thanks so much for the kind words on my "One Year Later".
I will post the first one too so You can see it.
JB
Sorry it took awhile to get back to you.
My puter died and \I have to borrow one when I can.
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JudyBall
Fri Dec 5 12:37:05 2014

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My Review of CHRISTMAS CHEER by failte
Too Cute
Awwwwww!
Who would shoot a reindeer at Christmas!?!
Maybe the lights were blinding him and he couldn't see what he was shooting.
A lot of hunters are like that.
They just point and blast away and go look to see what they shot later.
This was great Sarah.
Loved it.
Great rhyme and rhythm.
should be put to music.
God Bless and |Merry Christmas,
JB
My puter died and I have to borrow one whenever \I can so I'm not on line much lately.
Please give my apologies to everybody.
SL for this my friend.
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JudyBall
Tue Dec 2 09:22:29 2014

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My Review of
~ I Am ~
by heavenscentgirl1
Beautiful
This is excellent my friend.
Loved it from beginning to end.
A promise from the heart to be whatever is needed whenever it is needed.
A spectacular piece.
Bravo.
SL for this.
God Bless and Merry Christmas my friend.
Sorry I haven't been around much lately.
My puter died and \I have to borrow one when I can.
Hoping for a new one for Christmas.
JB
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JudyBall
Mon Dec 1 17:24:20 2014

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My Review of WOW! ITS CHRISTMAS AGAIN by gomsi
Well Said
Merry Christmas my friend and sister.
Wonderful sentiments expressed here.
Christmas is indeed for all of us, even those who don't believe in celebrating Christmas.
True for many it has become veery commercial but God appreciates what is in our heart as we celebrate the birth of The Savior.
Thanks for sharing this very uplifting piece.
Sorry it took so long to get back to you and thank you for the kind review of my "I Praise You".
Been working a lot lately and just too tired to write much.
Thanks again and \\merry Christmas.
God Bless,
JB

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JudyBall
Wed Nov 12 16:03:20 2014

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My Review of Being A Mother by MySanity
Well Said
Every good mother knows where-of you speak my friend.
No one ever knows the depth of a mother's love until they have their own first child.
Then, magically it all becomes clear.
My sister didn't even like kids a little bit until she had her own first child.
Then suddenly everyone else's children were so cute, not as cute as hers but still very cute. lol
Well Done my friend.
God Bless,
JB
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