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annalame
Fri Feb 9 00:55:59 2018

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My Review of To Kill And Die by michaelgallatin
I have often wondered the same thing. With some of the things I have been put through and to have a minister tell me it happened because man has free will. But if God is all powerful and all knowing why can does he choose to let the innocents in this world suffer. I am a Christian and I do believe in God, but I must admit, I have a lot of questions.
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annalame
Thu Feb 8 02:23:05 2018

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My Review of RETURN TO ME MY LOVE by kitty
Glad to see you writing again. Very nice work. I look forward to reading more.
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annalame
Tue Feb 6 02:01:47 2018

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My Review of Polished by michaelgallatin
Wonderful.
If only more people would take the time to see beneath the grime. Any of us can fall on hard times. Many of us have. Thank God to people like this who take the time. Wonderfully written.
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annalame
Tue Feb 6 01:58:46 2018

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My Review of Endless (For Jeff, A Most Fine Friend) by michaelgallatin
Well written
A great poem/ I have pondered this question myself throughout my lifetime. I am not sure that I would honestly know the answer to it. But like the student, my questions and quest for answers is endless. Great job
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annalame
Thu Mar 2 18:38:34 2017

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My Review of I am done rant by navyamwife
Sometimes it helps just to get it out on paper Momma. Do not let those people make you think you are or feel you are stupid. In the times we live in now liars are abundent
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annalame
Thu Feb 23 14:41:02 2017

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My Review of Caregiver (A Poem For Annalame) by michaelgallatin
Wonderful tribute.
Thank you so very much. This was very touching. Brought tears to my eyes. Care-giving is not an easy role, whether paid or informal, but it is a required role throughout life. I just wish more people would see what caregivers go through. Care-giving out of love is wonderful. Care-giving out of obligation certainly takes its toll. Thank you for seeing all we go through.

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annalame
Thu Feb 23 13:31:44 2017

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My Review of WITH HOPE ~ I SEE by kitty
Beautiful
A beautiful and well written piece that conveys your faith so very strongly. Keep your eyes upon Him and you will see what there is to love in this world.
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annalame
Thu Feb 23 13:29:28 2017

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My Review of Drowning In The Shadows by Silverblue
This poem really spoke to me. It described me a little too well. Sometimes it is hard to find the light in the shadows. It is easier to walk alone and wear a mask so that others cannot see the demons within. I will keep fighting against those demons with everything I have. And I look for the happiness in little things. A well written piece that I am sure will speak to many readers.

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annalame
Thu Feb 23 13:26:35 2017

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My Review of Struck By Lightning by michaelgallatin
Love it
I love, love, love this poem. It is a bit frightening but also so funny. What a jolt to the system that would be. LOL
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annalame
Wed Feb 22 21:15:06 2017

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My Review of There Was Soot by michaelgallatin
A wonderful piece. The comparison to Trump made me giggle just a little bit. I love the way you stood up to Satan. And also that it was a dream, or was it.
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annalame
Wed Feb 22 21:00:00 2017

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My Review of Schizophrenic Seuss by michaelgallatin
As a childcare provider for many years I know the story of Green Eggs and Ham very very well. This poem made me laugh. Great rhythm and flow. Thanks for the smile.
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annalame
Wed Feb 22 20:53:11 2017

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My Review of The Old Indian by michaelgallatin
A wonderfully
well penned poem. Great flow and rhythm to this piece. I enjoyed reading this as there is Indian in my heritage. I also love the imagery of the wolves in this piece. We have a timber wolf out here where I live and I love to just sit and watch her. Such a majestic creature. I love that he set the wolf free. So many would have killed it. Again great work. Keep writing
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annalame
Wed Feb 22 20:47:34 2017

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My Review of I Don't Give A Damn by michaelgallatin
A fun
and very well written piece. It made me smile on a day where I didn't think I was able to.
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annalame
Wed Oct 12 23:21:01 2016

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My Review of Broken Bones by Northern_Lass
This is a rough life to live. Although your kids are not being physically hurt think about what it may be doing to them mentally and emotionally. A well written piece about a tough subject.
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annalame
Thu Jun 23 22:42:39 2016

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My Review of Do Not Ask Why by JohnCreekmore
Great read
Very poignant poem about the hatred in the world. I find myself often trying to find the highest place within myself to seek refuge from all the evil and hatred in the world. Well written.

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annalame
Sun Dec 20 15:58:56 2015

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My Review of Oh the thoughts that plague my mind by navyamwife
I know that feeling Momma. I have been stuck for days. I get a few words or sentences out and then just can't. Just keep plugging away sometimes they come out in the strangest times and places. Don't let them eat at you. Chip away at them. And I am always here for the random thoughts that spill out verbally along the way.

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annalame
Thu Dec 17 02:03:41 2015

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My Review of Almost Christmas by navyamwife
You only think that those that love you cannot see beyond your mask. I have, I do, and I always will. I am always right here. You are never truly alone. All you need to do is reach out. Call my name. I'M HERE!!!! I am missing them too. Even the ones I never got to meet because they were gone before I made it home. I missed out on so much. But we make new memories every day. I hope at least some of them are good ones. And just so you know I would notice. But just like with me, I cannot make you open up. I love you

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annalame
Fri Nov 28 15:41:50 2014

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My Review of Sweet Baby James by JustLoveMe
Thank you so much for this loving tribute to myself and my son. It means a lot to know that we have someone in our corner. I know that your words are true and someday James and I will be reunited I just forget that sometimes and get lost in my grief at losing him. Again, thank you for your love and support.

Annalame
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annalame
Fri Nov 28 13:15:02 2014

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My Review of Six Months by JustLoveMe
Another great write and read. I can't say I enjoyed it because it is a sad state that people have to resort to such things just to have somewhere warm to be in the wintertime. But I will say that I enjoyed reading another of your pieces. Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more in the future.
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annalame
Tue Nov 4 17:32:15 2014

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My Review of Monsters by BaileyJakob
Since I live with a monster I know this all too well. I would have loved to see you continue on with that thought process. But the thought is there and no one in the world wants to believe it. But I tell you from experience it is so very true. Keep writing
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annalame
Tue Nov 4 17:29:32 2014

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My Review of The things that I can't say by navyamwife
A great poem and seeing as I am the person who you are referring to as friend in this poem and it is my adopted mother, I would know! There are so many things that cannot be said because they will only make things worse. Just know you can always say them to me. Who knows, I may even share some of the feelings that you have. There are certain things that just cannot be fixed. She has always been like this and that will NEVER change.
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annalame
Wed Oct 29 01:44:59 2014

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My Review of Reawakening The Dream by blossomwriter
I so needed the message and emotions that were in this piece tonight. Not many things have been able to speak to me lately and this one did deeply. Great write. Wonderful flow from beginning to end. I loved this piece. Keep up the great work, I cannot wait to read more in the future. Thank you!
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annalame
Mon Oct 20 02:56:49 2014

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My Review of My Endless Love by blossomwriter
A very well written and thought provoking piece. As a survivor of abuse this one speaks a lot to me and my soul. You are so right in your Author's notes that often during a calm and peaceful phase a temporary patch is put there and it can be easy for the victim yo believe that the abuser is trying to change. Unless someone has been there it is not something they can totally understand but your words go a long way in enlightening. Keep up the great work, I cannot wait to read more.
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annalame
Sun Oct 19 13:56:32 2014

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My Review of I Write by AlexWebster
A very powerful piece of poetry. The feelings that you portray are clear and well thought out. Although about heartbreak I truly enjoyed reading this piece.
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annalame
Sun Oct 19 13:48:52 2014

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My Review of I can imagine by navyamwife
A great piece. Totally different style for you!! I like it! Wouldn't life be grand if we did not just have to imagine but could actually live like that. I can imagine a world like that too but with all of that said will it ever happen? If even just half of these were realities the world would be a much better place
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