 jediallday
Fri Jul 1 10:13:02 2011
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| My Review of Influential Shades by
Exxiesheartbreak
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lovely  |
Ahh yes the rainbow, symbol of hope and endurance and the promise of all good things from heaven. Beautiful again.    |
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jediallday
Fri Jul 1 10:11:09 2011
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| My Review of Orange Beauties by
Exxiesheartbreak
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| beautiful |
| just beautiful. I love the way you look at the world through the mind and eye of a child and pick out that one little thing that is so glorious and sweet and highlight it like you are shining a spotlight on it for all the world to see *breathe* lol. |
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jediallday
Fri Jul 1 10:02:53 2011
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| My Review of Ashes Of Their Love by
asensation
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| remains of the day |
Ahh the remains of the day. Ashes truly do describe what is left when all love is gone. Another perfect sonnet. Come back to us Asensation.  |
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jediallday
Fri Jul 1 09:59:10 2011
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| My Review of I Worship Your Love by
asensation
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| beautiful |
Another beautiful sonnet by the master of sonnets. I haven't seen you around much lately. I trust you are in good health and if not that you are in good spirits. I miss you on here.  |
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jediallday
Fri Jul 1 09:44:26 2011
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| My Review of Love Sincere by
stevieinbg
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| very nice |
| passionate and sincere and I loved the honesty in this piece. It is not pretentious at all and speaks directly to the inner person. |
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jediallday
Fri Jul 1 09:42:13 2011
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| My Review of Behind The Mask by
jamcat
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| wonderful and personal |
| I feel for the man behind the mask. This is so accurate of me right now it isn't funny. I hope you can find it in your heart to peer out from behind and give us a wave? |
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jediallday
Fri Jul 1 08:52:15 2011
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| My Review of Flame by
ps7426
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| Very well expressed disappointment. I like the style and the emotional punch, with a tinge of hope looking forward to the future. I wouldn't worry if I were you, Federer has a few more aces up his sleave yet. |
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jediallday
Thu Jun 30 10:53:13 2011
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| My Review of Who Am I ?? by
poeticlady
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| captured the mood |
| I'm so glad I am not the only one who has written about a serial killer. Well done here, you've captured the mood of this very well without being too creepy. These are not easy to do and if done wrong they come across a little strange. But you have done a great job. |
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jediallday
Thu Jun 30 10:45:57 2011
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| My Review of World in Limbo by
cjaymac
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| well expressed. |
| Am right with you there friend. This expresses the frustration very well. If only tere was a cure for this disease called war. |
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jediallday
Thu Jun 30 10:23:05 2011
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| My Review of dusty memoirs by
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| Such profound vividness |
| Such vividness and earthreal expression and description, at once wholly depressing and yet so well defined. I love the way you mess with the structure in your pieces, giving them a rawness, as if someone was pacing back and forth in a prison cell, reciting endless phrases all strangely inter-connected by meaning only those who are imprisoned can know. Well done with this piece. It has depth and resonates. |
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jediallday
Thu Jun 30 10:17:59 2011
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| My Review of Refreshing by
LightestShadow
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| Very nice |
| Thoughts well expressed and very well written. Great flow and rhythm. |
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jediallday
Thu Jun 30 10:10:29 2011
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| My Review of A Power Cut, A Ryder Cup, And Dreams Of Wonderland by
philip19
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| fascinating |
| I think this is fascinating. I have been sitting in front of the TV on many occasions or the computer writing and nodding off and dreaming all sorts of nonsense. This is a new twist on an old tale and I like the uniqueness of the way you handle the idea of the absurdity of dreams. Great work and deserving of praise. |
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jediallday
Thu Jun 30 10:03:04 2011
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| My Review of Well Lit Path by
Exxiesheartbreak
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| so warm |
| My friend, you write these with such ease. Your love sonnets making me feel so warm and good and fill my soul with hope and heart. You make my day with your never ending source of love. |
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jediallday
Thu Jun 30 09:59:12 2011
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| My Review of The magnet by
Lillylilly
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| stunningly beautiful |
| So beautiful. My dear you are the mistress of understated beauty. |
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jediallday
Thu Jun 30 04:29:40 2011
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| My Review of " The Fly" by
Stacy
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| poor fly |
| Yes, it's almost as if the fly can't get the person's attention because all they hear is a buzzing little annoying insect intent on upsetting their day, when, if they stopped a moment and looked at the fly long enough and close enough, they might see into those big sad eyes a creature who just wants to be loved. *SWAT!*...now what was I saying? |
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jediallday
Thu Jun 30 04:24:41 2011
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| My Review of White lies by
KiTTiArrA
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| truth lies and love |
| Truth, honesty, lies, love, all seem to be inexorably linked, don't they. It's almost as though one cannot have a relationship without lies, as much as one can without honesty and trust. Well done again. Makes one think. |
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jediallday
Thu Jun 30 04:21:31 2011
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| My Review of Love isn't always a Faerie Tale by
KiTTiArrA
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| true fantasy |
| This has so much going for it. I love the fact that you have mixed poetry into the narrative, giving it a truly fantasy style. My dear, this has huge potential. It is not perfect and there were times I felt the flow was disrupted, but gee it is interesting and engaging to read. I love fantasy and this one has all the elements one would expect, love, betrayal, a damsel in distress, a saviour and perhaps a sad ending, mixed with a sense of hope and redemption. Lovely stuff indeed. It is not easy writing these types of stories and I cannot understand why people don't bother reading them. I'm spotlighting this to give more a chance to read it. |
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jediallday
Wed Jun 29 09:22:13 2011
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| My Review of Remembering Revolution by
dragonpoet
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| Nice and neat |
| I love the simplicity of the form and you did this piece well. This piece reminds me of the old WWI saying, "Lest we forget". Well done. |
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jediallday
Wed Jun 29 09:15:17 2011
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| My Review of "Dear Mother" by
Dancingfire
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| Inspiring |
| A very interesting piece. Tell me, did you let the picture inspire you or did you find the picture to fit your poem? Because of this piece I am going to do a similar piece taking a picture I find and writing a story poem on it. I have written ones on my own pictures in the past but have not written ones for other pictures. Thanks for the inspiration. |
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