nataliemccart Wed Aug 25 17:37:16 2010 Helpful: My Review of A World of Confusion by dreamer Excellent I like the simplicity yet full of meaning. Great piece, flows nicely and easy to understand. Great job! visible nataliemccart Wed Aug 25 14:24:05 2010 Helpful: My Review of Self Expression by jinglerjbell Good Good for your first personal poem. Only thing I would suggest is not to try so hard to rhyme. where a few of the words don't fit together. I like the flow though and feel like your emotions are freely expressed which is a good thing in poetry! visible nataliemccart Tue Aug 24 22:55:11 2010 Helpful: My Review of Brace Yourselves Children by ThePriestess Very good This flowed much better than the husband and the whore poem I just read. This was very well written. visible nataliemccart Tue Aug 24 22:52:11 2010 Helpful: My Review of The Saga Of The WHORE by ThePriestess Okay Your Poem had emotion but seemed to lack continuity. To me making the audience relate or feel what you feel is the goal. You do that to a degree but then you kind of lose me with the cottage cheese and skank stuff, just doesn't flow right. Structure is good. visible nataliemccart Tue Aug 24 19:21:29 2010 Helpful: My Review of Joy - senryu by JonLondon good Preety good. Ver warming Haiku. I got a little confused on the last line and meaning but it was still a pretty poem. visible nataliemccart Tue Aug 24 19:18:13 2010 Helpful: My Review of His Love by Roshanp Excellent Very nicely written. Very powerful message. I work with vicitms of violence and this is wonderfully stated. Heard many of them say similar things. visible nataliemccart Tue Aug 24 19:16:36 2010 Helpful: My Review of Out Of Your Depth by JonLondon awesome Great Haiku! I find them so hard to write. This was great, very cleverly written. visible nataliemccart Tue Aug 24 19:14:02 2010 Helpful: My Review of To you my friend by gomsi Good job Nice tribute to those who lose their live in war. I like how easy it is to read and understand. Poems that are simply yet honestly written can be the best kind. visible nataliemccart Tue Aug 24 19:12:15 2010 Helpful: My Review of These black creatures... by Minkz Good Nicely written but I honestly don't know what you were writing about? Bad dreams, ghosts? visible nataliemccart Tue Aug 24 19:03:00 2010 Helpful: My Review of Ceiling Tears by nofreaknclue good I applaud your writing about such a tough topic. visible nataliemccart Tue Aug 24 18:48:10 2010 Helpful: My Review of The Worst Poet by poetrymaz awesome I loved it and you mastered exactly how I feel. I was once told my poem wasn't a poem because it had too many lines and not enough rhymes-go figure! visible nataliemccart Tue Aug 24 18:42:40 2010 Helpful: My Review of Help Me God by ChiChi good I like the flow, the beginning is very catchy. visible

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