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Lone Tree

Author: Exxiesheartbreak
Created: September 24, 2011 at 05:27 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.76 Stars by 15 users with 16 comments 351 views
Lone Tree 
On the rocky ledge,
Creaks the dying fragile tree.
Falls from life no more.


Last Modified: September 24, 2011 at 05:33 pm


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Comments & Reviews ( X 15)

saiom
December 05, 2011

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If one had to be in a tree form
... living by the sea on a mountain
would be one of the most beautiful assignments

Thank you ... you can like Pinocchio's father
enkindling him... turn words into a living picture
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kntinaz
December 01, 2011

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Magnificent,,even without the picture for it explores life and it can appear anywhere...Thanks for sharing...Your friend and fan...Tony
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Exxiesheartbreak
December 02, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you very much tony, Exxie



dragonpoet
November 30, 2011

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The artwork matches the words of the haiku like the poem was written in response to the picture. It does look like the tree is going to roll down the hill.

Keep writing

Joan
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Exxiesheartbreak
November 30, 2011
(Creator) 		Thanks very much, Exxie



ThePoetDarkling
November 20, 2011

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a perfectly sad Haiku...good job!
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Exxiesheartbreak
November 20, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you again!!! Exxie



Deedee27
November 16, 2011

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Funny....
How we can see such different things....I see the tree that looks like every other but was singled out and stands tall in it's beauty. It has the power to grow life amidst the rocky soil and somehow finds nutrition to live in the salted waters.....This looks a lot like my home on the central coast of California and I am in awe of it's beauty!! great write although sad....
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Exxiesheartbreak
November 16, 2011
(Creator) 		I definitely see what you mean Dee...I must say i wrote the haiku before I picked the picture...so I kind of agree with you. Thanks for the read and review, Exxie



deidre
November 15, 2011

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Fantastic
Hey I really loved this Exeteress. Very well written!
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Exxiesheartbreak
November 16, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you so much, Exxie



user20962
November 09, 2011

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A gorgeous haiku andthe word (creaks) just puts a little bit extra which twists and turns for the juxtaposition to work so smoothly.
Lovely write dear exxie!!!
Woo
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Exxiesheartbreak
November 09, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you very much dear Woo!! exxie



Halfred
October 29, 2011

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Excellent
Few words, a picture. Well done.
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Exxiesheartbreak
November 09, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you very much, exxie



HPGreg
October 22, 2011

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Touching
I like the Pic, works great with this creation of this write. All though I am more of a sonnet writer, I do like good Haiku. My reason for liking Haiku is, a writer has to work hard to truly paint their vision that one has in their mind. For a writer to paint the imagery to make a piece come to life with such short lines, my hat goes off to them.
Life its self is on the rocky ledge, and soon will fall.

Thanks for sharing your talent with us,
Spotlight
HPGreg
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Exxiesheartbreak
October 22, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you so very much for the kind words, Exxie

HPGreg
October 22, 2011 		You're very welcome and thanks for sharing.
HPGreg



DeviantWriter88
October 07, 2011

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Intellect

It sets to the image perfectly,
this one lone dying tree,
might as fall peacefully,

withstand life so bravely,
Seeded life to this world intricately,
yet it dies in its lone forlornly,

as might we all, surely.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem - just odd thoughts of mine that stemmed from your art


Your fan and friend,
Deviant Writer
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Exxiesheartbreak
October 08, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you so much Dev...I appreciate you kind words, Exxie



jediallday
October 01, 2011

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Beautiful
A beautiful Haiku and a stunning image. I love it.
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Exxiesheartbreak
October 02, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you so much dear! Exxie



CloudNumber9
September 25, 2011

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Really nice haiku - they say so much in such a short amount of words - great work once again. Keep it up.
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Exxiesheartbreak
September 25, 2011
(Creator) 		thank you very much, Exxie



DewmanX4
September 24, 2011

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cool
When I read this I was thinking wow deep dark lonely place to be..

Thanks... Cool picture too

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Exxiesheartbreak
September 25, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you very much!



SkyEatsSkittles
September 24, 2011

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Good c:
I like it, it's dark. but i like dark things, it's quite good keep up the good work
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Exxiesheartbreak
September 24, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you very much! Exxie



andycapped
September 24, 2011

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Very fitting. Thanks for sharing, Urfriendfan, ~Andy
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Exxiesheartbreak
September 24, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you dear one! Exxie


Exxiesheartbreak
September 24, 2011
(Creator) 		p.s. take a look at the pic i put on it!


andycapped
September 24, 2011 		The tree of sadness. Such a beautiful tree. WE only blossom at night, because we are the Night Jasmine.



Galacticbeam
September 24, 2011

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expressive
All of life is precipitous' all of life is on the edge as your poem so aptly demonstrates. Thanks for sharing.
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Exxiesheartbreak
September 24, 2011
(Creator) 		Thank you so much!






      

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