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Author: Exxiesheartbreak

Created: October 01, 2011 at 12:36 am

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Personal | Philosophy | General/Other

Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 6 users with 6 comments 118 views

Exhilirated

Extraordinary inflections
Exquisite directions
Your princess is thrilled
such longing fulfilled.

Dance to your song,
Fall at your feet.
Together belong
By chance we did meet.

Chance's intention
Led me to here.
Love's sweet ascension
is how it appears.

Knight greet your princess
with honesty's grace.
leftover frowns
renewed smiles in their place.

Last Modified: October 01, 2011 at 12:42 am

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SanExpeditus
October 03, 2011

Helpful:

Graceful

Sometimes love needs to be awarded the highest form of translation that feels honourable and timeless... you, above all else, have the talent to do so with such grace and flair. Dear Exxie, this sweet and loving poem is strongly romantic and full of nobility, both with regal references and the sheer language you have written it it. Thank you for your endlessly versatile mind!

Additional Comments (1)

Exxiesheartbreak
October 03, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you my sweet friend for such a lovely review.I am humbled...your fan, ExxIE

Lovelyxox
October 02, 2011

Helpful:

Amazing!

This is so beautiful. You are incredibly gifted....

xox...Lovely

Additional Comments (1)

Exxiesheartbreak
October 02, 2011
(Creator)

awww thank you so much my friend! Exxie

jediallday
October 01, 2011

Helpful:

another beautiful read

I see you have lost none of your skill in turning words into worlds. I am transported here to a childhood filled with hope, helped by the image of the horse running wild and free. There is a sense of child like wonder at the world in the tone of your poetry which is inescapable.

Additional Comments (1)

Exxiesheartbreak
October 02, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you dear one! Exxie

lalipenz
October 01, 2011

Helpful:

As usual a lovely write yoiu write these with such grace
I am back as this is the last day before we go off for a 5 day holiday will be back here full throttle hopefully after that thanks for being such a support love u exeieeeee

Additional Comments (2)

Exxiesheartbreak
October 01, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you hun, and welcome back! Exxie