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WHERE ARE THEY WHEN YOU NEED THEM


Author: elfqueena
Created: October 02, 2011 at 05:37 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 77 views

WHERE ARE THEY WHEN YOU NEED THEM 

Why is it that people can't see you pain ,
when your hurt and so alone.
Why , do they think there is nothing to gain,
by helping you out when your down.

The ones that hurt you the worse ,
are the ones who say they love you the most,
But where are they when your in pain,
where are they when your about to leave your post.

When your doubts hit brings you low, oh so low,
you need someone you know to hold'
But seems like when your at your worst,
they leave you with a heart about to burst.

Why do people say they're your friend when they're not,
leave you alone when your cold, come when your hot.
Doesn't stick around to see your pain when they've nothing to gain,
when all you want is a word or two so you won't feel the pain..

I thought helping was what friends are for ,
boy was I a fool once more.
They just say bye then hit the door
yeah! For sure that's what friend are for.


Author Notes
I rewrote this with little different title a few words corrected so if you seen it before that is why.

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jediallday
October 02, 2011

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such hopelessness
This speaks of a hoplessly lonely heart crying out to be heard in a sea of voices trying to shut it out. I have often felt like this. This is a moving piece that connects in al of us a sense of betrayal by our friends at times. Thoughts and feelings well expressed.

elfqueena
October 02, 2011
(Creator)
yes it thats just what they did too lol but I guess I found out who my true friend are thank god it wasnt any of you lol



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