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Tentative Wonderment

Author: grruvy1
Created: October 22, 2011 at 10:57 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Erotica | Romance | Love
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 5 users with 7 comments 156 views
Tentative Wonderment 
Passionate echoes
Stolen moments
Yearning desires mounting
Embers licking the flames of my imagination
Driving me beyond that which is a semblance of control
What is, what was, what could be...
Bodies slick with passion
In that moment she holds my soul

Palpable rhythmic undulations
Derived from unrivaled temptations

Please, don't break me

Tastes of the divine
A look, a caress
Cradling her spent in my arms
Heaven sweetened with her scent

I am lost in her tears

At the pentacle, I awaken
Tentative moments of wonderment
Will I ever know...


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holypriest
June 05, 2012

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This is SOOOO GOOD!

Embers licking the flames of my imagination
Driving me beyond that which is a semblance of control
What is, what was, what could be...

I think I like this part the best, but IDK... It's all so good.......
SPOTLIGHT
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cristoferlentsch
June 05, 2012

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A Way With Words
I don't know when you wrote this, and I don't know why, but it speaks to me of a lover you wish was there. I wish I could help you, you wonderful person.
Cris
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Synchro
June 03, 2012

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I had wondered
if you write erotica. This is fine stuff. I like the lesbian approach, and subtly crafted....the passion suggested rather than displayed. You might wish to check some of my own erotic efforts (clearly marked in my list). "Apotheosis of a Lover" is my best, if you have time for only one.

I'm enjoying my first visit to your page. Not sure if "pentacle"is your intention. Have a great time if you go to my own page again, Judy. I always appreciate readers with intelligent comments! :-)
-Dean
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Awleyezonemein3d
January 09, 2012

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5.0=This Is where It's at
Now this is where it's at!! "Tentative Wonderment"... very much superb, fractioned thoughts of passion, broken touches in abstract motion of your mind, a sensual fantasy that never gets to fully explore!, it's dellusional within itself!... your vocab and slow sensual kiss of emotions by each word and intertwined lines were gorgoues!... one of my fav lines= "Palpable rhythmic undulations
Derived from unrivaled temptations" this is very deep and really nothing short of flawless by design of buried romance between your heart's contemplative sheets, what idiot gave this 4 stars!!!???

5.0... this Is the best peice i've read from you simply because it shows you push into my fav territory and also the Imagery was great top to bottom. keep going!. Spotlight.

much <3
-Brandon
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grruvy1
January 12, 2012
(Creator) 		brandon, you humble me...i hope to live up to your critique. coming from a peer whom i respect, it means a lot to me.....thank you, buddy! you're the best *no, u r grruvy1* no, brandon is the best! *no, grruvy1, u are!* lol only with u could i have this kind of fun with a review....ty, brandon, fo being my friend! love you and mucho hugs!



user26209
December 10, 2011

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Good Work
Will I ever know...you say this at the end...it reminds me of well, is this love or could
it grow into something stronger. I really felt the emotions in this.
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grruvy1
December 10, 2011
(Creator) 		thank you so much for your comments of support. it's peeps like you who keep me coming back and staying a member of this site. Namaste, my friend.



LoveRelinquished
November 17, 2011

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Intense!
As the reader, I felt that dream with you... Such desire and passion, well done!
And, as a woman, I envy the muse! (haha)
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user20962
October 22, 2011

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A real wow moment !
I can honestly say I adore these gorgeous words of adoration in a moment of wishing for that moment.
Your word choice .to me is flawless.
It's works like this that inspire me even though love is not a genre I normally follow much as very often it's too predictable , this stands as a figure head of words.
If I sound enthusiastic I am, as this is lovely

Woo
Spot light, bravo!
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grruvy1
October 22, 2011
(Creator) 		you have definitely made my night! lol seriously, your comments and encouragement are kind and humbling. i've not been coming on-site very often recently, but it's feedback from peeps like yourself that make it all worthwhile. namaste, my friend

October 22, 2011 I'm glad that I have and as you can see my night was lightened by your work.
Thank you for actually replying also (some do some don't )
Woo :0))
Your newest fan

grruvy1
October 22, 2011
(Creator) 		you're too cool! you've just made a new fan, too! have a grroovy weekend!

October 22, 2011 Thank you very much
You enjoy also Woo :0)




      

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