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Author: Exxiesheartbreak

Created: October 24, 2011 at 11:32 pm

Entry Type: Prose, T (13+)

Category: Love | Love | Contemporary

Entry Stats: 4.8 Stars by 15 users with 16 comments 257 views

Without Words

It is such an irony that two people with such a firm grasp of words
could be enveloped in complete passionate love without...............
one
single
word
said..............

Without a single word,
the love
rained
down.

Without a single word,
flesh clung to flesh.

Without a single word
Eyes met eyes.
Hearts formed a cadence.
Fingers clasped fingers.
Glances formed hope.
Smiles wrapped smiles.
Lips tasted lips.
Embraces hugged embraces,
and kisses tasted kisses.

Without.................

One

Single

Word.

Last Modified: October 24, 2011 at 11:37 pm

Author Notes

The result of a profound experience...and not one word was spoken.

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kitty
July 03, 2012

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Love is a language

Unspoken love knows no bounds. To know you is to love you. Words so subtly created tells a tale of lovers in love. Thanks for this cleverly orchestrated number. Sweet melodies! Thanks for the insight. Kitty

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sabreena
October 30, 2011

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amazing

this is beautiful, works like this motivate me and push me to my limit

keeep up the good work, it pays off in the end.

Additional Comments (1)

Exxiesheartbreak
October 31, 2011
(Creator)

I appreciate the nice review, Thank you, Exxie

jediallday
October 30, 2011

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Profound

Profound and beautiful and shows a connection to the unspoken word. Just shows that love needs no language other than that of the body, heart and soul. SL

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 31, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you my dear friend, Exxie

Galacticbeam
October 29, 2011

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superb

Reminds me of that song by Simon and Garfunkel, "Sounds of Silence". Indeed, you have captured that mystery in this poem/

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 31, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you so much for the lovely review, Exxie

Anika
October 29, 2011

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But that is the essence of love... is to feel the person as closest as possible to us... anything different is something else... not love...

very nice writing!

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 31, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you for such nice words, Exxie

saiom
October 29, 2011

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a beautiful rendition of the truth that there are infinite realms more subtle and holy than those in which speech occurs

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 29, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you for these kind words, Exxie

Halfred
October 29, 2011

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Unspoken

Speaks loudest of all.

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 29, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you very much! Exxie

Lillylilly
October 27, 2011

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이 시를 주목

Ah such sweet poem that explore most delicate feeling of love.
i enjoyed my dear
이 시를 주목.Spotlight~

Additional Comments (2)

Exxiesheartbreak
October 28, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you LILLY!!! Exxie

Lillylilly
October 30, 2011

welcome my beauty..my lovely poet..hug you

kntinaz
October 25, 2011

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Bravo

Genuine, and oh so true the souls of two could meet without a word and all would already be said and all would be known. What makes that even more remarkable is how you have captured that event into words that speak and define it so that we all can feel and share what it would be like or reminds us if we have had such an experience..Bravo again for a very poignant and enrapturing write....Spotlight ..Tony

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 26, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you so much for these gorgeous words Tony! Exxie

Elpis
October 25, 2011

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One Single Word: Perfect.

Exxie, that was truly enrapturing. You continously displayed such clear imagery and then the phrase..."without a single word." Each time you repeated that phrase, I truly felt the impact of the situation, the weight of its meaning. I'm entirely taken in by this piece.

Need I mention, SL of course! Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece, as well as your thoughts and emotions

~ Elpis ~

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 25, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you so much for this beautiful review elpis! Exxie

user20962
October 25, 2011

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Hi Exxie,
This is truly a beautiful write of the imagination passed through thoughts
Wonderful, gorgeous, imaginative
Thank you for sharing
Woo :0))

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 25, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you Woo...but this is not just my imagination...It was very real...I am glad you enjoyed it..Exxie

Exxiesheartbreak
October 25, 2011
(Creator)

p.s thank you for the points Woo!!!

elphie
October 25, 2011

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Wonderful write. It truly is amazing how things like that can happen. Keep up the great writing my friend. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 25, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you very much my dear friend, Exxie

elphie
October 25, 2011

you are very welcome my friend

SanExpeditus
October 25, 2011

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Beautiful Irony

This is the epitome of a paradox, my dearest Exxie, your graceful and passionate poem proves just that! Another exquisite write from your inexhaustible pen of greatness!

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 25, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you so much San for such a wonderful review, Exxie

lalipenz
October 25, 2011

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Without wasting one single word I would say this is superb Exxie spotlight

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 25, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you my dear! Exxie

lalipenz
October 27, 2011

u r welcome dear

philip19
October 25, 2011

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good prose.

There wasn't need for any words-your physical contact and emotional feelings sufficed, but I should imagine that there was the odd moan and contented sigh.
good prose-spotlight-

-philip.

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 25, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you so much Phillip! Exxie

heavenscentgirl1
October 24, 2011

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Wow !

Exeteress, what a beautiful write! These words brought so much emotion in me it is unbelievable. I feel that anyone who reads this piece will be longing to find what you have described to us at least once in their lifetime. I genuinely hope that what you wrote in the "Author Notes" is true - so I'll know that it can really happen.

Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece with us,
heavenscentgirl1

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Exxiesheartbreak
October 25, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you hun...and yes it is exquisitely true.I can attest to the fact that it can happen! Exxie