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The Newfangled Sky

Author: stellarram
Created: December 13, 2011 at 05:54 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Romance | Relationships
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 614 views

Line of Fire  

I never saw the rise of a flower in Sunlight.
But whenever I see you, I feel the fragrance of Moonlight.

When you come near me, my eyes get a treat.
Please don't look at me, my heart skips a beat.

I know everything about you, but not what you think about me.
I want to kiss you smoothly, your lips are so yummy.

You are my Queen, my heart is your crown.
I am your King, if not; I am just a Clown.

Getting into your soul, will be my line of fire.
Certainly I can cross that, with an eternal desire.

When you first said "Hi" to me, I said "Hi" to heaven.
Tear my heart & see; that is where your name is graven.

My looks are not mind blowing, but I'm smart.
You too know a lot about me; I can turn you to an art. (And hot )

I'm not a Millionaire, but I'm an Extraordinaire.
Please don't say no to me, and make my life a Questionnaire.

Love is not what we see, it is what we feel.
If you are in my life, my sorrows will heal.

Please marry me, you are my life's boon.
If we do join, then Everyday is a Honeymoon.

Stellar Ram

Last Modified: January 20, 2012 at 04:27 pm
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Author Notes

Before I propose my dream Girl, this poem is what I feel about her. I captured those exact feelings in words. If some guys want to win their girl friend's heart via a proposal, take the tips (Or words ) from this poem.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

December 20, 2011
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Nice poem:-) I wish she should come back to you after reading this poem. All the best for your love.

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December 13, 2011
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This is absolutely sweet and amazingly romantic!

Thanks a lot friend! I'll try to keep up the same sweetness in my future works too. Please feel free to read my other poems & share your thoughts. Take Care!

Stellar Ram.

 stellarram replied on December 13, 2011


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