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The Newfangled Sky

Author: stellarram
Created: January 11, 2012 at 07:01 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Inspirational | Psychology | Self Help
Upload Stats: 4.25 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 314 views

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I want to know where I can search me.
I think my life is hit by a Tsunami.
Who cares if I am lost?
The World will forget me so fast.

Did I give in to the hands of fate?
Can I make my heart a clean slate?
My existence is inside a closed delf.
Everything I have seems to be pelf.

Love, Greed & Desire had torn my heart, a bit.
Despair, Angst & Laziness were also not out of my ambit.
People tell that I am stubborn & aggressive.
I am feeling that my path is too regressive.

Nobody understands me, even the closest of People.
I'm not a Newton, who can find me with the fall of an Apple.
Inside me, I still possess Honesty & Confidence.
My conscience provides me with lot of Prudence.

I thought long & hard; where to search for.
My dad always tells me, do things with a plan & vigor.
I went deep inside me without axiality.
I found that I didn't lose my originality.

Life is always the survival of the fittest.
I will prove that I am one of the toughest.
I will not bow down to dishonesty.
For all my errors, I will pray God for an amnesty.

Being myself had earned me lot of enemies & critics.
Even if I'm literally killed, I'll reincarnate like a phoenix.
I found me again; the amount of my zest is rife.
I will learn to love every second of my life.

Stellar Ram

Last Modified: January 20, 2012 at 04:27 pm
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Author Notes

What makes a person to face his/her tough situations in their life & come out of it? It is their originality. This poem is a tribute for all people who live by their heart.

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January 12, 2012
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There aren't too many good fellas out there anymore. Most people are hypocritical and two-faced, double standards galore.
This was a very refreshing read.
Inspirational and feels very true.

"Learn to love every second of my life." A great finish! I doubt I will ever achieve that mentality myself, but I wish you the best.

Thanks for sharing!

Thanks mate. I often make a soul search to refresh myself. I did one before writing this poem. You will achieve that mentality my friend, I pray God to bless you with all success.

Thanks for your encouraging words! I read your works. To be honest, they were amusing. I like your unique style of writing. It seems that you start without any plan & end up writing a good piece of work. Your thoughts are mangled & newfangled.

Take Care & Keep in touch mate. You are welcome to read & comment my other works too.

Stellar Ram.

 stellarram replied on January 13, 2012

January 11, 2012
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great poem
Sounds like your search is sincere and will bear much fruit. Follow your spirit and be true to yourself.

Thanks a ton mate! Wish you the same. I read some of your poems & they were really good. Keep it up, take care & be in touch!

Stellar Ram.

 stellarram replied on January 11, 2012


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