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The Newfangled Sky



Author: stellarram
Created: January 17, 2012 at 07:13 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Romance | Relationships
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 226 views

Shot in your Heart  

You can take me to heaven. 
Don't you believe me? 
Hold my hand; say yes for our love. 
Whole world will become my heaven. 

You can take me to hell. 
Don't you know how? 
Say me no and leave me. 
I'll be a living dead in this earthly hell. 

I can't live without you. 
Why am I thinking like that? 
I lost me to you. 
I want to win you; thereby winning me back. 
 
I can make the moon run away in shame. 
How is it possible? 
When we walk in the shore during night, I'll kiss you. 
Then when you smile, even a full moon can't stand your brightness. 

I must go one step ahead of fate. 
In what way this can be done? 
You just need to realize that I am all yours. 
Then fate can't ever stop you from being mine. 

My dear, your eyes are splendid pieces of art. 
Do I need to give a love shot into your heart?
For you, I'm no big deal. 
Without you, my life will not heal.

We both can make this World so small. 
Are you interested to know how to do it? 
For that, I have to be with you and you have to be on my shoulders. 
Then the Earth will revolve around us only. 

© Stellar Ram 2012


Last Modified: October 08, 2014 at 10:21 pm
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Author Notes


This poemis dedicated to my estranged Girl Friend Rini.

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cbochange
February 03, 2012
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i loved it omg only if we could really say that to a person to make them understand anyway i loved it thanx



(Author)
Thanks for your encouraging Words dear! You understood it, but she didn't... I hope God helps me in this case. I've posted works in other genres also. You can feel free to read & comment on them too. I'll try to do the same when I'm free. Take Care... Cheers!

Regards,
Stellar Ram.

 stellarram replied on February 04, 2012



      

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