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The Newfangled Sky

Author: stellarram
Created: March 12, 2012 at 12:07 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Relationships
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 345 views

Landing in the Moon  

Only few lucky mortals got a chance to visit her.
I never thought I am going to be one of them.
Others got to the same moon; but I got my own which gave me a cloying fever.
Landing a Kiss in her face is a bit difficult; she is an epitome of fem .

The chiming of her eye bells reminded me of beautiful butterflies.
The pimple craters in her cheeks & mole near her lips smiled at my soul.
For receiving her love signals, my senses don't need satellites.
Understanding her heart's art is my immediate goal.

Am I talking about my Moon or my Girl?
Both are same, because they provide light to my darkness.

Stellar Ram

Last Modified: March 17, 2012 at 05:08 am
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Author Notes

For a change, I tried to be short & sweet this time.

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March 12, 2012
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beautiful piece!
This is beautiful. I love the end. Made me smile

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