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Author: poet101

Created: April 03, 2012 at 09:13 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Sad | Personal | Free Verse

Entry Stats: 4.16 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 203 views

Blah A Different Type Of Girl

Different with a capital Duh.
A tired feeling it truly becomes.
Why me I begin to question.
Why love me, why miss me?
I'll truly hurt you in the end.
That's just how it is its dangerous.
To love me to miss me to want me.
Its dangerous to love me.
Me I cant miss I can't truly love.
I try but it backfires it hurts.
Love me less, leave me be.
Spare your heart save your soul.

Last Modified: April 03, 2012 at 09:26 pm

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shannonstarling
April 04, 2012

Helpful:

Poet, your pieces are always full of your soul. It's like your soul vomits out of your hand onto the paper.

I enjoyed this one like I enjoy most everything you write, in fact... why have I NOT joined your fanclub yet? Good write!

Additional Comments (1)

poet101
April 04, 2012
(Creator)

Thank you for your kind review glad that you enjoy reading my writes
Thank you for becomimg a fan of mine

. Love poet101

jkalwaye
April 04, 2012

Helpful:

you are really a bold as you express your decisions straight without any fear .good effort .thank you for sharing .jk

Additional Comments (1)

poet101
April 04, 2012
(Creator)

Thank you for reviewing and glad to share my writes

. Love poet101

CloudNumber9
April 03, 2012

Helpful:

I like the fact you can be a little bit quirky when writing this piece. To nitpick, I think backfires is one word. Still, I think you did a decent job here, and expressed your feelings well. Thanks for sharing your emotions.

Additional Comments (1)

poet101
April 03, 2012
(Creator)

Thank you for your wonderful review very personal wtite my emotions. Your right backfires is one word lol thanks . Your welcome thank you for reviewing

. Love poet101

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