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The Newfangled Sky



Author: stellarram
Created: April 24, 2012 at 12:31 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Erotica
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 210 views

Honey Rain with Honey  

I am waiting for her outside in the faint drizzle.
Now I can see her coming out in stunning a blue dress, which makes me sizzle.
Today the weather is so cold.
To show my love towards her, I have to be bold.

We both started walking in silence.
The frequent rubbing with her Silky skin throws me into a temulence.
Her hairs are flowing like a black Niagara.
To enhance my erotic mood, I don't need a Viagara.

Hardly anyone is present in the street.
Exchange of eye language between us increases the heat.
The drizzle still continues to give me trance.
The smell of rain & her perfume makes me go on a thumping prance.

The faint drops of rain turned giant & we are looking for a shelter.
As she is melting me with her beauty, I can call her as a Smelter.
We both are walking inside the subway.
My secret fantasies about her are taking my heart to a highway.

We note that there is no human presence inside here.
We both are craving for each other to come near.
I just touched my Rini's mini hands.
She hugged me tightly & we both are going past mortal rands.

The Kiss of my honey in my lips is honey.
She is exploring me like a jumpy Coney.
Golden Moments of life can't be re created by money.
This rain is surely a rain of honey.

Stellar Ram









Last Modified: May 14, 2012 at 12:32 pm
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Author Notes


Another poem which I wanted to present it in a rather sweet & sexy manner.

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user22767
April 24, 2012
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It has a nice flow.And I think the scene of the rain is alluring..nice work!



(Author)
Hi Angels,

Thanks a lot for your comment & rating. I request you to read my other poems & a novel which is currently Work in Progress. After that, please share your valuable feedback, which will be useful in improving my writing skills. Advice from experienced people like you will always be helpful to me.

Regards,
Stellar Ram.

 stellarram replied on April 24, 2012



      

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