June 26, 2013 at 07:57 pm
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Yes, a clandestine episode in sequence is what I am going to share with you...
It was a spring daybreak walk with spongy thoughts.
We all had our own magical pots.
I tried to fling craving looks to some striking Women who were departing somewhere.
They watched their watches but failed either to watch me or to be watchful of me.
Holiday made me to wander sloppily.
Tripping and nipping the rainy day, I arrived near a forlorn warehouse.
"Please, save me. Someone please help me".
The tone was strident and lucid.
I went into the realm of that place.
It looked like a Mirage.
Single voice amplified to manifold voices with the same appeal.
I awed what to do; but I kept going in.
On my way, I met an elfin Kid.
I asked her to elucidate me on what is the mayhem inside.
"Ssshhh.... Secrets can't be enlightened. You go and see the bizarre for yourself".
What is there to witness except my thoughts of sea?
The Child kept moving under her own steam outside like a cloud mutely stirring away.
Will my inner serenity catch up with me?
My can of thoughts were opened in my mind.
All of them bawled in one voice, "Yes, we can".
Qualms started evading from me; I went in with a brimming poise.
I did see lot of defying People who were tied in manacles.
Who is the Master of this Puppetry?
I searched for that person all around.
All of them beseeched me to liberate them.
They didn’t grasp that I also got caught in this hem.
Somebody stroked my Shoulders.
I turned around and saw a red clad Woman.
“Three questions I will ask.
You should not wear any inner visor.”
“I expect candid answers.
If you give me them, I will discharge these dancers.
If first question is answered, you can get out.
If second query is retorted, all others can get out.”
“If the third one is properly responded, I will get out after gratifying one wish of you.
The Child whom you had seen had got only the first one right.
Are you ready for the game?”
I replied in affirmative.
Pain filled eyes of the captives gazed me in tension.
“Who are you?”
“I am Original”.
“You earned your first privilege.”
“Who are these captured People?”
“Flawed creatures who can be forgiven.”
“You lose your second privilege.”
“Barter my first one with the second one.”
“I warn you, there is no way back.”
“It is fine with me.”
A magic had happened. Chained Humans were set gratis.
They thanked me with their tears.
“Go out, you all craven collection of flesh! We must be alone.”
Everyone went away.
“The last one, who am I?”
“I am not a judge. But you are doing your duty, you are a labor.”
“Tell me what I can do for you before I leave.
But you can’t go away from here any time.”
I looked straight into her feminine soul inside the devilish outfit.
“I want to confer you some love.”
She broke down and cried in my Shoulders.
“I don’t want to punish them. But If I don’t, I will be castigated.
You were right for the second one too.
I lied so that I can take you to the third.”
“Go back, resign and come back soon.”
She vanished with a tearful smile.
I started walking back to my home.
The rain drops made me wet.
She thudded back to Earth like a reuniting Pet.
I am piggy bagging her to our own Paradise.
© Stellar Ram 2013>
Last Modified: January 08, 2014 at 03:42 pm
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A somewhat complex poem for the readers to understand as it is basically woven on top of a fantasy story. Your honest feedback is most welcome.
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