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The Newfangled Sky



Author: stellarram
Created: June 10, 2014 at 01:06 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Nature | Peace | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 4.25 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 288 views

Groovy Me  

I was ambulating through my pleasant thoughts.
They grinned at me.
I smiled back with a bit of Coyness.
They said to me, We are here to give you eternal Bliss, your Highness!

I am schmoozing to my inner self.
He bowed down to me.
I told him to behave with Impulse as well as Nous.
He confirmed me, I am here to oblige you, my Lord!

I thought about the remarkable times which I had with my Parents.
They called me and strewn their Love.
I asked them to act as chaperons to lead me in the right side forever.
They beamed and said, We are always there not only to guide you; but also to sacrifice for you!

I was roving around with my Paramour.
She kissed me in my Forehead.
I wanted her to be my evergreen Companion.
She whispered to me, I am your Soul.

I was having a feud with the Almighty.
He pampered me with his Blessings.
I demanded him not to leave me alone at all.
He told me, I am here to show you the Light, my Son!

I got bored and I started gossiping with the Sky.
It came and inquired what I wanted.
I asked it to rinse my wits with a relishing Rain.
After the Shower, it assured me, I will do this till the time you come and join me in the Space as a Stellar!

Am I Groovy or Groove is me?

Stellar Ram 2014


Last Modified: June 11, 2014 at 04:29 am
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Author Notes


During a silent night, I felt compelling to write this Poem than anything else. I never disappoint my impulsive desires. Your Progressive comments about my works are always welcome.

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iheartdallyw
June 10, 2014
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Groovy Baby, Yeah!!!
This is like a poem from a candid video of the Rolling Stones or the Who or some other rock band like that. I can just see Mick Jagger strutting around cigarette in mouth reciting this poem or having this happen to him. I think that's a compliment anyway it is supposed to be. You and this poem are... Groovy Baby!!! I love the rhetorical question at the end



(Author)
Oh Dear Dally! Thanks a Ton for such an inspiring Comment. I am a big fan of Rolling Stones. I wish you hear their song "Heaven" which is one of my favorites. Mick Jagger nonchalantly smoking a Cigarette and reciting this Poem would be the Panache Wet dream for me.

May be I will share my personal play list of songs with you sometime; if you are kind enough to send me a private message of your email ID.

Thanks Baby! Your compliments mean a lot to me and I wish I can still Groovy even I face the toughest of challenges in my Life. Encouraging words from People like you will only enhance the chances of me doing so.

Take Care of yourself and kindly be in touch!

Warm Regards,
Stellar Ram.

 stellarram replied on June 11, 2014




Princesslove
June 10, 2014
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AMAZING
You have written and portrayed this poem well. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Thank you for sharing your poetry art.



(Author)
Thanks a lot Princess! Appreciation from enthusiastic readers like you is always encouraging.

Warm Regards,
Stellar Ram.

 stellarram replied on June 10, 2014



      

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