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The Newfangled Sky



Author: stellarram
Created: June 17, 2014 at 01:01 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Ars Poetica | Romance | Love
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 343 views

A Winter Night without You  

Oh, the solitary night of winter!
Why don't you go away?

My senses are craving to be filled with the air of my girl's breath.
Savouring fire and chasing my desire towards her; both are alike.

I am bewildered.
I am meandering myself; trying to move towards the arc of her love.

Love is short, but its waves are everlasting.
Our affection’s waves will always rejuvenate themselves at some corner of this cosmos.

Oh chirping night bird, what can I share with you beauty?
Go and tell my Lassie that I want to glide with her.

Neither I am concerned about living nor do I worry about dying.
But I am anxious about teaching this World, how to love.

We are not made for each other.
We shattered our older selves and shaped a new 'Us' for us.

Oh Icy wind, you are aching me!
Why don't you go and turn some blistering thoughts in my Woman?

Whenever I am not there with her, she dreams about me.
They will make me sleepless.

We've seen lot of pains together.
We also dreamt about peaceful ending in each other's laps.

Sacrifice is the real love.
As I promised you all, my dear readers; we will show this Sphere; how to love, live and dissolve in waves.

Oh my dear Almighty! Give both of us a space in your shadow.
We have a lot of time left to continue our playing in this Earth; once we are weary, we will join you.

© Stellar Ram 2014


Last Modified: December 30, 2014 at 09:20 am
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Author Notes


This Poem was written based on the thought of how much tough the Winter Nights would be; for a couple who are in true Love.

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silentbutnotdead
June 17, 2014
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Well-done
I love your poem it was well written. I you such a good writer and I say that with confidence my dear friend.



(Author)
Dear Girl,

Thanks a lot! Your words give me a lot of energy to keep on writing. Much appreciated!

Warm Regards,
Stellar Ram.

 stellarram replied on June 17, 2014



      

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