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The Newfangled Sky



Author: stellarram
Created: December 11, 2016 at 05:55 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Emotional | Peace | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 190 views

Freedom - The Pleasure of Leisure  

Just tap into the realm.
Will you be able to witness the calm?
Just gasp into the beauty.
Can you be able to disregard your duty?
Throw a stone into that lake.
Do those ripples in the elixir seem to be a delightful fake?

Where is free will? Where is freedom? Where is my very own Anarchy?
I want to kill my boredom; which is sometimes called as life.
Pleasure is not money, it is not power, it is not people and it is not even love.
It is creation, it is fervor and it is untainted leisure to make your own destiny.
What can I tell you about my mood?
Can you please look under my invisible hood?

Dates and times are not my friends.
History and its lessons are not my enemies.
Good cattle and their kin don’t need fence.
Reaching the heights of reality is not an issue for pygmies.
Will all the jealous and lousy of this Sphere think of me as a fool?
I don’t bother about waiting, because I have inside me; a cold-blooded pool.

Kill the instance and wait like a hawk.
With the hope; that you and I can overcome the shock.
Will the child be able to complete its rhymes?
Will the flower be able to blossom with the dew’s chimes?
Getting up to see beyond the horizon.
As colorful as a blazon of paintings and as colorless as the powerful menazon.

I want to be those water droplets which reside on Lotus.
It is as safe and as soothing as being in Mother’s fetus.

© Stellar Ram 2016
© The Newfangled Sky 2016



Last Modified: December 11, 2016 at 06:20 pm
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Author Notes


After a long gap, I feel like I am back to my usual playground; which is this website that had enabled me to improve my writing skills. Here is a very light-hearted poem which depicts the different thoughts of a passionate wanderer.

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RamSlade
December 12, 2016
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Creative . . .
although you lose me every so often . . A lot of ground has been covered within the line of his poem. I was a "passionate wanderer" for two lost decades. I wandered in some high ground with exotic ladies, and descended to the lower rungs of the mean streets with women who could never be called ladies. This thing is,learned from both.What I am attempting to say is never look up at the rich" with scorn because they are rich and likewise never look down at the lower run of life with disgust. You can learn by watching them. I'm afraid I got to rambling. I'm sorry. Spotlight!
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(Author)
Dear RamSlade,

Thanks for your wonderful and honest review. I am glad that you've shared your experiences; especially about both your Elite and forgettable experiences of life. This is not all rambling and I would like to hear more of it, if you are ready to open up.  I guess that you are also an example of a 'Passionate Wanderer' similar to me; both in creation and in search of joys of life.

Coming to your review, thanks for the spotlight. I want to clear one thing. I neither hate rich or do I look at the lower times of my life with disgust. But what I do agree is I am a bit egoistic and it is  really annoying for me to be in ditch for a long period of time; where all I can see is unfit people are getting better things. Again, neither am I jealous nor am I ranting on anybody, it is just the way of the World today. 

I know I will get up soon but it is the time which is taken to do that is what is currently frustrating me a lot. I hope things get better for all of us. Thanks again and sorry for making you read my ramblings as well.  Take Care and Bye!

Warm Regards,
Stellar Ram.

 stellarram replied on December 13, 2016



      

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