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A Poem by xjustmex93


Author: xjustmex93
Created: December 28, 2017 at 06:53 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Writing | Arts | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.25 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 48 views

For The Love Of Writing (short&Sweet)- FEEDBACK P  

Can i use this platform for my current thoughts?
who knows, who cares, who bares to ask?

Overfilled with joy as the views arise, A smile like the sun.. beaming
over city sky's

Indeed let me capture you as you read,
Let the words plant the seed.

Explore the movie in our heads, as we lay at home in our nice warm beds.

Each one completely different to the next 
All the different interpretations of the same text.

     We call them stories...
I call them adventures yet to be had
Keep then going..... Never Stop Putting Pen To Pad. 



Last Modified: January 01, 2018 at 09:41 pm
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Author Notes


I haven't posted on writers network for around 4/5 years, But i still enjoy writing and capturing people in stories,  I think its fascinating how one story can have completely different meanings and interpretations from one person to the next but still be the same story. This is a short piece expressing that. Hopefully the first of many more to come. id appreciate all the feedback and comments possible. 


Many thanks
xjustmex93


 
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Comments & Reviews



JohnCreekmore
December 29, 2017
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Suggestion
Since you ask, I suggest you learn to differentiate between the possessive and the plural (stories vs. story's).


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EdwinBozie
December 29, 2017
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Pleasant to the ears
This is pleasant poem to read, especially out loud. It's quite amazing how you keep alternating the structure of the stanza's lines and the rhyme. For a while, it thought it would be better, if you split the second and fourth stanza's into two different lines taking into consideration the rhyme but reading further, I also realized that your rhyming pattern keeps changing. It was quite pleasant to read this. Good work and thanks for sharing.


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