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Author: carolann

Created: September 10, 2007 at 07:54 am

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Military | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 365 views

Dreams Of Home.

Dreams Of Home

He thinks of home every night
in a tent lit only by candle light
How he hates this land of hell
so many secrets he cannot tell
He dreds his dreams most of all
nightmares come as darkness falls
No one here to hold him tight
how he misses mom's goodnight
So each night he trys to sleep
hope's no one can hear him weep
There is a girl who waits alone
for a lover to come back home
In his country he puts his trust
and he endures what he must
Sleep tight my soldier boy
I''ll send sweet dreams of joy.

carolann crowley 9/10/07

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Comments & Reviews

RichieRich
January 14, 2008

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Very Nice heartfelt poem..My Brother wuz in Iraq twice with tha USMC...But I hope ur son returns home to you soon...Take Care & Thank You so much for critiques on some of my poetry!! I Appreciate It very much soo!!

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caralouann
October 10, 2007

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Very nice poem

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snono
September 20, 2007

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hey,you are unbelievable.what poetic spring have discovered? you are the poet.

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