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Just Going For A Beer!!!
Just Going For A Beer!!!!
Hon I'm going for a beer,Well have not seen him in a year
Last I heard him and Annabelle were in the bar raising hell
Her hubby's happy so I hear,me I never did shed a tear
What the Hell,maybe Ill go have a beer!!!
Carolann Crowley rewrite on 7/13/09
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Awwwww, well you didn't need that loser anyways. I am glad to see that you turned this from what could have been a very sad poem, to one that made me smile. Don't get me wrong, sad and dark writings are my favorite. I just like what you did with this one.
And hey, go and have a beer, you deserve it. LOL