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Author: carolann

Created: July 13, 2009 at 09:00 am

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Humor | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 160 views

Just Going For A Beer!!!

Just Going For A Beer!!!!

Hon I'm going for a beer,Well have not seen him in a year
Last I heard him and Annabelle were in the bar raising hell
Her hubby's happy so I hear,me I never did shed a tear
What the Hell,maybe Ill go have a beer!!!

Carolann Crowley rewrite on 7/13/09

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Comments & Reviews

clb520
July 13, 2009

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Well, this made me chuckle at first. Because I know what you mean. But I really liked it, and I think that you know things are better for you. Keep writing, look forward to reading more.

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ThePriestess
July 13, 2009

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Awwwww, well you didn't need that loser anyways. I am glad to see that you turned this from what could have been a very sad poem, to one that made me smile. Don't get me wrong, sad and dark writings are my favorite. I just like what you did with this one.
And hey, go and have a beer, you deserve it. LOL
Timmie

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Dom1n1ck
July 13, 2009

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Fun

That was a very positive spin on what appeared at first glance to be a very negaive situation. I do like the tone of the this, it made me smile. D

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