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love. sucks, doesn't it?



Author: Jazzy9829
Created: January 22, 2010 at 01:30 pm
Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)
Category: Lyrics | Lyrics | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments 224 views

ugly side 
i must have sneezed
on knees i freeze
I mean, i just choked up
but somehow i slept
i dream, i mean
i dreamt of nothing

I'm able to breathe
a sweet relief
now that you're here for me
a northern degree
dove into me
now I'm recovering

i only want you to see
my favorite part of me,
and not my ugly side,
not my ugly side

so hook up a CB wave
a wave for conversation flow
I'm shown to your cage,to wage this rage
don't let me go

a kick and a scream
is all that seems to mean a lot,thus far
yeah,i wont let you on my stage, my page
you can't know, but you have to know

that i only want you to see
my favorite part of me
and not my ugly side;
not my ugly side

so calm... your so calm
and now it's dark
i look for you to light my heart
I'm between the moon and where you are
i know i can't be far


Last Modified: January 22, 2010 at 01:52 pm


Author Notes
i really dont like it when people criticize my personality, so i feel like i have to cover up my ugly side...

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