A Poem by misslovebird


Author: misslovebird
Created: April 23, 2010 at 04:46 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Sad | Romance
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 184 views

broken hearts and stars  

I'm done wishing upon a star
because i have let this go on to far.
I can now see,
that we were never meant to be
together forever.
I will miss
your very sweet kiss
that could fix almost anything,
but obviously not us.
I hope you never forget me
because all i see.
is your beautiful face
that i could never replace.
Never stop being you,
for if you do
then everything shall be lost
in a very dark place.


© misslovebird - all rights reserved

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gouri
June 07, 2010
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brief and sweet
it was brief and very very sweet.i really like it. good one!


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Bassoonia
April 25, 2010
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Not Half Bad
Granted, I would've apprecitated a wider vocabulary expanse. However, your theme, rhyme, and emotion made up for it. Nice work!


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