A Poem by Emelane


Author: Emelane
Created: September 07, 2010 at 05:55 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Love | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 706 views

I Will Think Of You  

You are gone.
All is silent.
I cannot see nor touch-
I am blind
without my light
I am unheard
Without my voice
I am unseen
Without my soul

Such agony
Is your parting
I shall not rest until
I am beside you
If It means
I have to silence
this empty world you have left
me so cruelly
alone to.


© Emelane - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews



SheaRyhai
September 09, 2010
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"this empty world you have left" - I really wish this line could be shortened, as to flow with the rest of the poem. Otherwise, really nice solid read here. Emotion was expressed simply but powerfully. Lovely write. ~Shea


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DemeraraLady
September 07, 2010
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great
if it means i have to silence this empty world you me so cruelly... alone to
my best line, .. "telling it like it is....

a wonder piece.

one love Demeraral


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