A Poem by elphie

Author: elphie
Created: November 15, 2010 at 06:41 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Sad | Personal | Romance
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 3 comments and 264 views


There are many things I want to say
Should I beg you to stay
Or just let you go away
Sometimes you're a mystery to me
Maybe it's time I set you free

I wish I knew
Exactly what I mean to you
Is our love true
After all we've been through
Can I count on you
To see us through

My heart says stay
While head is telling me to run away
Save yourself
Put your heart on the shelf
Listen to your brain
Stop feeling all the pain

© elphie - all rights reserved

Author Notes

I wrote this shortly before my ex- boyfriend and I broke up. It was a very confusing moment in my life.

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Comments & Reviews

January 07, 2012
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To let someone go is not an easy task and then to move forward can be enven harder but U can do it!!!

I totally agree but it is also important to know when it is time to let someone go.

 elphie replied on January 07, 2012

November 23, 2010
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The hardest thing is letting someone go, yes it hurts at the time, but in the long run you'll realise that if it's not meant to be be you'll look back and be glad you walked away.

Well done, I really felt like this was a hard decision for you to make and am glad to see that you made the right one and that he is now an ex

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November 15, 2010
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nice......it will get better though write your heart out hon it helps

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