A Poem by MusicMyLife

Author: MusicMyLife
Created: January 12, 2011 at 01:51 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 160 views

Someone To Love...  

Holding my hand as we walk through the trenches,
the city dwellers throwing up their love and drugs,
we stand and observe a man with broken luck,
he is observing our strong bond and love.

He screams for a settlement, some drive,
some hope, his hands are up, swaying as he plays drunk,
the streets are a mess, the man in strees, is cradling a bottle,
like a baby wanting feeding.

We try to help a slowly decreasing soul,
his eyes are flooded, drenched in tears,
he yelps at the sky, pounding his fists on a blooded wall,
a man god needs to help.

Drunking sorrow bears all,
an injection of love is needed,
he has none, none for years,
we try to help, but he needs a wife,
a child, someone to lov.

© MusicMyLife - all rights reserved

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

February 16, 2011
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This is amazing. And i agree with the comment below. Hunia is right

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January 12, 2011
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truth... god there are so many people that this situation aplies to... this is definately the truth

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