A Poem by DerLaufenSpielt


Author: DerLaufenSpielt
Created: May 09, 2011 at 05:48 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Non Fiction | Romance
Upload Stats: 4.83 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 179 views

Five minute lover  

If she asked me tomorrow

What happened yesterday?"

Id tell her of a time when we spoke

If she asked me what I did yesterday

Id tell her of a time when she smiled

If she asked me what I did today

Id tell her

I etched her name into my eye lids

I dont want to forget my five minute lover


© DerLaufenSpielt - all rights reserved


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Vegetarian101
June 03, 2011
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perfect
Very nice, very deep, over all fantastic job!


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elphie
May 10, 2011
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This is a very unique piece. Keep on writing . I look forward to reading more from you in the future.


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SanExpeditus
May 10, 2011
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5 Minute Wonder
This is so clever and so intriguing for its originality, I especially love the last two lines. Thanks for sharing this!


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