A Poem by carmurr


Author: carmurr
Created: June 26, 2011 at 07:24 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 192 views

THE FREEING OF MY SOUL  


I will never forget the time in my life when rain drenched my soul
Tears of blood were trapped inside and found no way to flow

It came out of nowhere, remembrances of the past
I felt flooded by forgotten memories that just seemed to last

Years went by as I struggled to survive the trauma of my soul
I felt so fractured, all alone, as my childhood started to enfold

It took years to pick them up, as when it rains is pours
But God came and showed me the way, as He opened up new doors.

But walking through them is frightening, never knowing where they’ll lead
But when I did, although years passed, one day I was finally freed.

(c) 2011



© carmurr - all rights reserved


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jediallday
June 26, 2011
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This is spiritual and life affirming. It is an honest poem with good flow and technique. Well done.


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