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Creepy Crawly-Through The Eyes Of A Serial Killer
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Author:
ThePoetDarkling
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| Created: November 13, 2011 at 02:13 pm |
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Entry Type:
Poem, M (16+)
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| Category: Horror | Mystery & Crime | Thriller |
| Entry Stats: 4.62 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments 480 views |
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Creepy Crawly-Through The Eyes Of A Serial Killer 
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I search for one to play my game,
To fall in Creepy Crawly’s net
It cannot be just anyone,
She’ll be unique, the one I get
The full moon shining bright tonight,
My Creepy Crawly beckons thee
I smell the air, zone in on you
Then turn to you, so you can see
Pure evil stands in front of you
You turn away and try to scream
But I’m too fast, I grab your throat
And carry out my evil scheme
Don’t wonder what you could’ve done
Was not your fault, you lying there
Snug as a bug in your own bed
So innocently unaware
You fight a bit, but soon give up
As Creepy Crawly’s killing you
I have my way, I have my fun
Wasn’t anything you could do
You lie there silent, almost dead
So beautiful, I stroke your hair
I watch life flicker from your eyes
You watch me now, with that blank stare
All that you were belongs to me
We’ll always have special rapport
You heed my will, you are my slave
You’re with me now, forevermore
With my work done, I make my leave
I stalk back out into the night
To lurk in darkness once again
To wait for more to tease with fright
Last Modified: July 21, 2012 at 04:03 pm
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Author Notes
I am deeply addicted to true crime and serial killers in particular. In my mind, the worst of these are the "home invader". Here we are, (supposedly) safe and sound, minding our own business in our home, when the most evil of killers strikes...chilling, scary and horrific! The most innocent of victims, victimized by the most atrocious of killers...here, I tried to write through the eyes of the killer instead of the victim...it scares me that my goal was met easily, without thought...this poem was written in less than 20 minutes and begs the question; Do I have it in me?
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MichaelTBlack
August 20, 2012
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Oooooh, scary
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This one sort of reminds me of Richard Ramirez. And firstly I must say how offended I am! How dare you write about a murderer with vacuous morals who goes around and invades homes! And I'm pretty sure he's killing a woman! How sexist! This must mean that you approve of woman killing, you big sexist murderer!
No, no, wait. I DO have a brain. Oh, this is a work of fiction. And well written a that. I'd say you definitely have it in you! Kindred spirits are we as well. I am also fascinated by the sick and twisted minds that stalk the line between cruelty and madness. The other day at work I think I scared some of my coworkers by going on a 20 minute lecture about famous cannibals...
This was well penned, and well worded. Some eerie imagery here. Very well done, dear friend.
""We serial killers are your sons, we are your husbands, we are everywhere. And there will be more of your children dead tomorrow." - Ted Bundy
Infernally yours,
Michael Thomas Black
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Appolo
August 13, 2012
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I am chilled to the bone!,WOW!
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The words roll out with such ease as I cant fathom,my eyes meet the killer ready to pounce and I'm forced to runaway!,this poem turns words to real images lurking within our mental confinements,I can,with no shredd of doubt,safely say tha you have met and exceeded your goal,your poem transports iys reader to the mind of the serial killers roaming around our homes,with such flawless ease,such poetic beauty!,thanks for sharing such a work. |
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