A Poem by KaylaLuckett


Author: KaylaLuckett
Created: March 21, 2012 at 08:29 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 167 views

You Are my Inspiration  

You hold the light
that guides the stars
to their brightness

You have a touch
so tender, so mild

Leaves unbroken smiles
to be captured

Your so beautiful
So strong
Been
to
hell
and
back

Still surviving this life
I give you credit

Still smiling even if your
heart holds all pain
still wishing for the sun
on a stormy frozen day

You have been discovered
just to pull yourself down under

You though are alive
and that is more than
most have in this one life

Do you know who this is?

Go into the water
and look in the reflection

It is you.
You possess this poem.

You are the pen that writes
these words.

You are the inspiration to
each and every line.




Last Modified: March 21, 2012 at 11:51 am
© KaylaLuckett - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews



deep_soul
January 02, 2013
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Great write mahn!!!...
A suggestion, hope you don't mind.
last two lines.

An inspiration behind each word..
Wind is yours, fly away.
Fly like a bird.


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kdstorm73
March 21, 2012
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This is a very touching piece. You did a great job expressing the emotions in this piece


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