A Poem by psychotales


Author: psychotales
Created: June 09, 2012 at 04:12 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Non Fiction | Dark | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 188 views

Needle  

The needle, my arm.
So young, so nave
who would of thought I'd be so calm
amidst the chaos of my mind
just once, just twice
should have used a knife
a quicker death.


© psychotales - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



user47831
March 16, 2013
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yess
I get this totally, we all dabbled in one substance or another and more by luck than design most survive, many don't and we all get scarred by the need for oblivion.
I had a girl we were 19, she lost me and herself.
I wrote a poem in her memory Crown of Thorns and Im sure it will speak to you my friend. Hi 5!


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Believe
June 09, 2012
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True
Well wrote and a true short insight into
the hell of drugs,
and a summation that death would be an equal thrill, an end!


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Littlevoice
June 09, 2012
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Good Read
A calm but pertinent message, like much good poetry short and precise well written KS


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taiglum
June 09, 2012
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Wow. Totally intense. So dark but at the same time somehow almost enlightening. Good job. Thanks for sharing


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