A Poem by Writer-Love

Author: Writer-Love
Created: August 27, 2012 at 01:42 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Relationships | Heartbreak | Despair
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 146 views

Love Comes With A Price  

The water from her eyes
Those tears that she cried
you took away her life you took away her heart
She loved you forever and always from the start
But what happens when love comes to a price
He didn't even think twice
He went home the next day covered in dirt
She never returned
All he had in his hands was a dirty old shovel
Her parent cried on end
He went to sleep
Her parents stayed up all night
Searching for her were the Police
He lie back in peace

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Author Notes

"Love is a criminal when it is in the hands of a twisted person"

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August 27, 2012
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wow dark sad piece.

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August 27, 2012
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this is very sad but has a lot of emotion in it.
i enjoyed reading it.

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