A Poem by germannie


Author: germannie
Created: October 14, 2012 at 04:51 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Free Verse | Psychology | Romance
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 144 views

It's Always Me  

Iím always the livid one
Finishing the touches on a hand-made blade
Sticking it into the back of your loved ones

Iím always the mournful one
Writhing in my own invited melancholy
Pushing myself deeper into the rabbit hole Ė totally on purpose, of course

Iím always the insane one
Watching as you forever twist my words into your own dagger
Dragging my friends behind enemy lines

Iím always the bitter one
Shooting down every opinion youíll ever have
Rolling my eyes as you talk yourself in circles

Iím always the prudish one
My skin never warms the right way to your touch
And thatís somehow my fault

At least I tell you it is


© germannie - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



MISSYPAMMI
October 21, 2012
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Wow this completly reminds me of myself, i can relate to every thing in your stanzas. Which is kinda sad but great poem!!! I love it


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JudyBall
October 20, 2012
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Hmmmmm,
The first step toward getting better is the ability to admit you have a problem.
Happiness is a decision we make.
We decide to be angry or we decide to be happy.
With one decision we are miserable with the other we are content.
It all begins and ends with US. It's our OWN DECISON.
A good write.
God Bless,
JB


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sonneillonxo
October 14, 2012
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Powerful.
This reminds me of a darker time in my life, and I relate completely. I'm still coping with it, and this just sounds like something I felt. Great job at capturing this!


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