A Poem by Little_zombie

Author: Little_zombie
Created: December 24, 2012 at 05:06 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Dark | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 213 views

I'm Dead  

Breathing in a loop
the night goes on wishing the sun would fall to it's death
so I know what it feels like being dead
let the demons claim my soul and voice
bury me underground
no one will save me
Left to rot alive alone
lost for words and forgotten how to cry
give me a reason to remember to breath and beat.
And I give you a reason not to
they say everything is going to ok
they lie.
Breathing in a loop
Life goes on

© Little_zombie - all rights reserved

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January 06, 2013
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the poem just sound as a dream you had, suicidal though cuz i see you dont want to be save , good work continue with the spirit, i love your style

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January 04, 2013
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December 24, 2012
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Nice poem

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