A Poem by Whiskurz


Author: Whiskurz
Created: January 18, 2013 at 05:47 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 130 views

Broken Toy  

I watch your kisses fade away
Your smiles all disappear
You thank God I'm home to stay
But indifferent, when I'm near

The love I see within your eyes
Are remnants from the past
I'm no longer your heart's prize
The promise didn't last

You gave your country all you had
They gave you back a chair
That's all you see, you're always sad
But war is never fair

I'd rather they shot me in the head
So I wouldn't know your name
They took away your life instead
But I'm the one you blame

I watch each day as our love dies
Crippled, I've stolen your joy
You look at me with pitiful eyes
Like a child sees a broken toy


Last Modified: January 18, 2013 at 07:47 am
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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



matelotrod
January 18, 2013
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This is sad yet beautiful. Please tell me this is not written from experience. The content is very deep and moving. Extremely well written and it flows beautifully, please keep them coming, very well done. Rod.


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