A Poem by withonearrow


Author: withonearrow
Created: January 20, 2013 at 02:45 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 84 views

Outsider Pt.2  

I finally made it on the outside
Why would I want back in
Escaped the norms of society
You think its something I regret
I am thankful to have been able
To leave behind lies and worthless friends
Sure now I'm stripped and completely naked
But at least I don't have to follow trends
Because now that I'm actually alone
With no one left to impress except my self
I am free to wander on my own again
To experience reality and feel what exists
Admitted that I didn't have anything
Never committed or contributed with meaning
But its time to turn those tables
Take the first step towards becoming found


© withonearrow - all rights reserved

Author Notes


Still needs work but Ill edit it if I find time, maybe I won't. Who knows?

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lovericky123
March 09, 2013
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I LOVE THIS POEM IVE ALWAYS WANTED TO BE ON THE OUTSIDE OF LIFE BUT ITS REALLY HARD SOMETIMES. GREAT POEMS


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