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Outsider Pt.2

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Author: withonearrow

Created: January 20, 2013 at 02:45 am

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 29 views

Outsider Pt.2

I finally made it on the outside
Why would I want back in
Escaped the norms of society
You think its something I regret
I am thankful to have been able
To leave behind lies and worthless friends
Sure now I'm stripped and completely naked
But at least I don't have to follow trends
Because now that I'm actually alone
With no one left to impress except my self
I am free to wander on my own again
To experience reality and feel what exists
Admitted that I didn't have anything
Never committed or contributed with meaning
But its time to turn those tables
Take the first step towards becoming found

Author Notes

Still needs work but Ill edit it if I find time, maybe I won't. Who knows?

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lovericky123
March 09, 2013

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I LOVE THIS POEM IVE ALWAYS WANTED TO BE ON THE OUTSIDE OF LIFE BUT ITS REALLY HARD SOMETIMES. GREAT POEMS

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