A Poem by WakeTheMoon


Author: PRO WakeTheMoon
Created: February 07, 2013 at 12:54 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.87 Stars by 8 users with 8 comments and 181 views

Pick The Rose  






Pick The Rose



















Pick the Rose

Go climbing to my snow-capped mountaintops
Discover each reserved valley of my being
Explore the scathing heights of my ecstacy
But please do not trample on my soul
Take the smallest treasures found
Feel the smoothness of my
slopes as I stretch out in
your plateau of love
Run through the cleansing pools of my
flow and drench yourself in the satiny
branches of my embrace~While
you gather enjoyment from the
gaze of depth-be sure not to
step on my delicate buds
Sniff in the fragrant
scent of my
power
Enter the glorious path into my garden
Delight in nature's patterned blanket
Lounge in luxury of a picturesque
love field. Radiate the feelings
from within broad scope
Find buried treasure
Pick the roses on
my emerald
vine







The background music title is China Roses










Last Modified: July 30, 2013 at 10:28 pm
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Author Notes


The picture of the rose here is my own artwork, created digitally


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 17)



BlueLagoon
March 05, 2013
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Breathtaking
Yourself and Heavencentgirl 1 write the most beautiful of poetry it takes the breath away loved it so creative. To be able to write a fraction as good would be over the moon. You have a very special gift.



(Author)
Your reviews are so delightful. Just the way you appreciate poetry. This one inspires me to write a piece entitled Over The Moon. Thank you, many times!

  WakeTheMoon replied on March 08, 2013


How on earth did you create digitally so very clever ~ have to admit I cannot understand certain things on this site I have tried uploading my pictures and making them larger but it will not let me saying to big where am I going wrong is one huge ?

Over the Moon - look forward to reading once written.

  BlueLagoon replied on March 08, 2013




failte
February 10, 2013
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My, you do come back
with a bang and not a whimper!!! Another SL worthy work that is beautifully created by the hand of a master of descriptive narration and word smithing. You are truly outdoing yourself these days. Perhaps we should all take a little time off if it brings out such beauty. Very, very lovely.SL Sarah



(Author)
I highly recommend the time off to rejuvenate! I feel like a new person since I can put the responsibilities of work behind me for awhile. Thank you so much for your visits!

  WakeTheMoon replied on February 10, 2013




JohnR
February 09, 2013
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Wow!
This piece touched of several emotions ..... Love, desire, passion, yearning ..... I'm speechless. Very well done. Bravo!



(Author)
Thank you so much for your visit and your recent notes about art! Much appreciated!

  WakeTheMoon replied on February 10, 2013




user48396
February 08, 2013
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But please do not trample on my soul......... very deep
beautifully arranged as always,
the emerald vine.. a classy touch



(Author)
Thank you for graciously entering my garden. Your footsteps here did no trampling whatsoever and the emerald vine weaves its leaves through winters frosty cold into open hearts. Your sweet visit is cherished.

  WakeTheMoon replied on February 10, 2013




Aspiring_Angel3
February 07, 2013
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It is always amazing to
me, how you can seem to top yourself, each and every time! Such a beautiful read for this snowy, cold, day here. It warms the heart to read your words. I know that you are also an artist. I have been meaning to ask you if you use some of your own art on your work? Regardless it is alway such a pleasure to visit you. Heartprints left in all honesty and SL's left to bring others to enjoy the warmth that is you. Care for one more my friend? SL Lesa



(Author)
This is one of the only pieces that displays "my artwork"~ I may try to bring more if the art matches the words. Thank you so much for your generous awarding of SL's! You are so kind!

  WakeTheMoon replied on February 10, 2013




kitty
February 07, 2013
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Delicately sensuous
Music and verse in this one captivates the heart and emotions. Takes you where you dare to go with sheer delight. Thanks for descriptive piece that's not vulgar or over bearing.



(Author)
Thank you. I hope to not write with vulgarity. I am glad you found this of value.

  WakeTheMoon replied on February 10, 2013




heavenscentgirl1
February 07, 2013
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Sensuous...
Sue, this is a beautifully penned sensuous piece my dear friend.

The words you've shared painted such a beautiful image as I read through each line. The rose and music added just the right amount of ambiance to this piece - just in time for Valentines Day.

Thanks for sharing another beautifully penned piece from your golden pen my dear friend...and it should be in the SL.

- heavenscentgirl1



(Author)
Thank you HSG! It is always a joy to receive your reviews! Much appreciated, believe me!

  WakeTheMoon replied on February 10, 2013




DemeraraLady
February 07, 2013
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Feel the smoothness of my
slopes as I stretch out in
your plateau of love

wonderful poetic lines..
in time for valentine..



(Author)
Thank you for your visit here. Being a true romantic-I love Valentines Day, thanks again

  WakeTheMoon replied on February 07, 2013



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