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Author: sarat

Created: February 08, 2013 at 09:47 am

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Political | Current Events | Free Verse

Entry Stats: 3.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 37 views

Sarcasm

A traveller
Was not a reveler
Disturbed to see
What's going on?

Own people selling us
Own people killing us
Hello!
No anthem can cover
With the shield of faith
Lost in the ocean
Thrown like stones
On the closed shutters and walls

Open your eyes see the truth
The times any fool can see
If anyone lay beside me

See!
So expensive this came to be
The broken wings of love and peace
No one ever dared to swim
In this lake of heat

Violence I came to meet
Even a mole can see
Killing ain't yield no money nor peace

So silent I came to be
The times any fool can see
If anyone lay beside me

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Comments & Reviews

bugsy123
March 10, 2013

Helpful:

WOW!! Good poem! It's exactly what goes on in the world! But i don't get why you called this poem 'Sarcasm', because, in my view, it has nothing to do with sarcasm. It's a good poem, but it just doesn't suit the title. Apart from that, it is good and describes what people do, how they react etc. Keep writing!

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