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Author: andycapped
Created: March 04, 2013 at 06:31 pm
Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)
Category: Sad | Spiritual | Love
Entry Stats: 4.93 Stars by 25 users with 25 comments 338 views

" UNTOUCHABLE " 



a
love you in a gothic way pictures


And I feel like I knew you before
and I guess that you can hear me through this song

and my love will never die
and my feelings will always shine
and my love will never die
and my feelings will always shine

and I know that you just wanted me to belong, to someone
and I guess that now I`ll just be moving on, to someone

and my love will never die
and my feelings will always shine
and my love will never die
and my feelings will always shine

a
love you in a gothic way pictures


I`ve never betrayed your trust
I`ve never betrayed your faith
I`ll never forsake your heart
I`ll never forget your face
there`s a feeling that I can`t describe
there`s a reason that I cannot hide
`cause I`ve never seen a light that`s so bright
the light that shines behind your eyes

I`ve never betrayed your trust
I`ve never betrayed your faith
I`ll never forsake your heart
I`ll never forget your face

There`s feeling that I can`t describe
a reason that I cannot hide
I`ve never seen a light that`s so bright
the light that shines behind your eyes

I can`t see this life what you mean to me
when I dream, I dreamed of you
when I'll wake, tell me what I do

I had to let you go
to the setting sun
I had to let you go
to find your way back home
I had to let you go
to the setting sun
I had to let you go
to find your way back home

a
love you in a gothic way pictures


Why I should feel this way - Why I should feel this way
Why I should feel the same

Something I cannot say - Something I cannot say
Something I can't explain

I feel you outside
At the edge of my life

I see you walk by
At the edge of my sight

Why I should follow my heart - Why I should follow my heart
Why I should fall apart

Why I should follow my dreams - Why I should follow my dreams
Why I should be at peace

I feel you outside
At the edge of my life

I see you.. walk by
At the edge of my sight

I had to let you go
To the setting sun

I had to let you go
And find a way back home

I had to let you go
To the setting sun

I had to let you go
And find a way back home

a
love you in a gothic way pictures


(When I dream, I see you) - (When I dream, I see you)

I've never seen a light that's so bright - I've never seen a light that's so bright - I've never seen a light that's so bright

Blinded by the light that's inside - Blinded by the light that's inside

Blinded by the light that's inside you

I had to let you go
To the setting sun

I had to let you go
And find a way back home

a
love you in a gothic way pictures



















Last Modified: June 26, 2013 at 02:57 am


Author Notes
To The Songs That We Reflect Upon,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Comments & Reviews ( X 36)

magicrod
November 19, 2013

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I always find a song or songs to my mood whatever it is... and you sure breathe music in and out.
definitely, a song written from your heart blood, composed by the rhythm of its beat, sung by the very soul of yours.

Bless you always, and may love back to you again.
magicrod



andycapped
November 20, 2013
(Creator)
Yes, music finds you when you need it the most. Sometimes it says exactly how you feel. Plus, I had writers block at the time and truly needed release. This song still touchs me deeply. Thank you again, Magicrod. And thank you for the points. You shouldnt have, but it was very sweet of you. Thank you very much!! Hugs!! ~Andy



bickerstaffe
July 12, 2013

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awesome!
What BEAUTIFUL and sensitive lyrics! I thoroughly enjoyed them, and the accompanying soundtrack. Simply gorgeous!!! Keith


bickerstaffe
July 12, 2013
I especially loved the verse, 'I've never betrayed your trust' thru 'the light that shines behind your eyes.' BRAVO Andy!!!


andycapped
July 12, 2013
(Creator)
Yes, this is the other song by, Anathema I used to relate with my felings towards the one I love. My writers block was at its severest peak. The more I tried The harder it got. I needed to tell her through some kind of poetry or writing, writing is important in our relationship, its what brought us together, so its a need. It works therapeutically. Thanks for sharing, Keith. Im glad you enjoyed the song. Youtube Anathema, you'll love it/them. ~Andy


andycapped
July 12, 2013
(Creator)
Yes, this is the other song by, Anathema I used to relate with my felings towards the one I love. My writers block was at its severest peak. The more I tried The harder it got. I needed to tell her through some kind of poetry or writing, writing is important in our relationship, its what brought us together, so its a need. It works therapeutically. Thanks for sharing, Keith. Im glad you enjoyed the song. Youtube Anathema, you'll love it/them. ~Andy



BlueLagoon
June 06, 2013

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SAD
Wow this is some write and the music brings it all to life ~ so much sadness and pain within this write it speaks volumes sL


andycapped
June 06, 2013
(Creator)
Thank you, BlueLagoon. This is a song used to relate within. Been stuck poetically for awhile now, but needed to get my point acrossed. This song and " Angels Walk Among Us" were used. I know I need to break this writers block, but until them please bare with me. Thank you for stopping by. ~A*C*



crisante
June 04, 2013

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superb and inspiring
" I had to let you go
to the setting sun
I had to let you go
to find your way back home
I had to let you go
to the setting sun
I had to let you go
to find your way back home"

really like these lines, within encapsulated the will and determination to sacrifice just for the love you have for that special someone, i am inspired to write and read again and again your poems, my idol, salute for a great poet, cheers



andycapped
June 06, 2013
(Creator)
Thank you, Sir!! This is a song written and sung by, Anathema. I used it to relate to the emotion I have been feeling. Been stuck poetically for awhile now, I needed something to get message acrossed. This song fit perfectly. Thanks for checking it out. ~A*C*



08cw87
May 29, 2013

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on tenderhooks till the end feeling the sadness and heartbreak come over me beautiful.


andycapped
June 06, 2013
(Creator)
Thanks for checking it out. Kinda stuck poetically, this song by, Anathema really related to how I felt, so I used it to get acrossed. Thans again for stopping by, sorry it took so long, didnt see it in my email. ~A*C*



ThunderStorm
May 28, 2013

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love it
My friend andycapped u are truly motive I love this poem I love it just motives me keep on writing friend and thanks for sharing your special treasure with other talent and many thanks this poem is going to spotlight And metal music is the best u have the skills to be a true writer thanks again your friend thunderstorm

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Weirdme101
May 28, 2013

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Very interesting
In a good way interesting to me is good loved reading it


andycapped
May 28, 2013
(Creator)
Its just a song with its lyrics. It really fit the the situation and emotions I was in at the time, still lingers within. Thank you very much for checking it out. Thanks for joining my fan club as well, we be clubbin!! Surely will swing by and check out ur works of art soon. ~Andy


Weirdme101
May 28, 2013
No problem at all thanks for explaining


andycapped
May 28, 2013
(Creator)
Ur Welcome, WierdOne!! ~A*C*


Weirdme101
May 28, 2013
Thanks



ofwolfwoman
May 23, 2013

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oh my god...
That was so...deep...wow..I am just nearly speechless....Do i need to say anything? really? this piece speaks for itself...I would love to have this on a cd and blast it in my car...it is touching and haunting and just absolutely perfect...i would love to hear this every single day...this is amazing...thank you for letting me listen to this and read it....wow..


andycapped
May 24, 2013
(Creator)
I feel the same way!! It really touched me at a time when things went wrong. Haunting very much, but the spiritual aspect overpowers it as well. Thanks for checking it out. Im glad it moved you as much as it did me. Thanks again!! ~Andy



WakeTheMoon
May 01, 2013

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Very expressive, excellent work, Andy! SL

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kitty
April 30, 2013

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Emotional turmoil seen ..
...here in this piece. Music reflects the mood of the writer. Saddens the heart of the reader. Emphasis placed on the words gives greater impact.We all make promises which for reasons unknown sometimes gets broken and the hurt begins. Emotional in it's entirety. Thanks for allowing us to share these emotions and empathise, Andy


andycapped
April 30, 2013
(Creator)
Thank you for understanding the meaning of all this. One way or the other, emotions must get out. Thanks again, Kitty!! ~A*C*



silverwings
April 30, 2013

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WOW!
Hey Andy,
Well that was a bit flash...very very impressed...hope all is well my friend...Jules


andycapped
April 30, 2013
(Creator)
Hi Jules!!!!!!!!! I'm doing ok? lol Up and down daily. Like a roller coaster ride, huh? lol Just was reflecting in/with song. Songs are the best to vent your feelings, especially when it fits so well to how you feel. Hope ur doing well. Life moves whether we like it or not. Take care of yourself, Dear Jules!! <3,,~A*C*



philip19
April 30, 2013

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Very good attempt at songwriting-probably too long for the charts-but an Album track for sure-hope you pass this on and get it published-spotlight for good attempt-Philip.


andycapped
April 30, 2013
(Creator)
Dear Phillip, thank you for stopping in and enjoying this beautiful song. I'm pretty sure its published, its already on an album called, "Weather Systems" Written & song by, Anathema. Their from your neck of the woods, Liverpool. I just borrowed it to reflect an emotiom I was feeling at the moment. I couldnt say it in my own words. Stuck like Chuck!! {writers block} Tongue tied, etc!! Music is a great tool to vent with. Thanks for checking it out though. Cheers Mate!! ~A*C*



faithmairee
April 29, 2013

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Hauntingly beautiful
Sad but beautiful song that I enjoyed very much. Excellent work, Andy.

Faith


andycapped
April 30, 2013
(Creator)
"To the songs we reflect upon",,,right? Music is a great tool used to reflect emotion, especially when your stuck on writers block! lol I'm glad you enjoyed the song, its epical. You dont know how much it took me let her go. It was so hard I couldnt even say it in my on words. Thanks for checking it out,,,,~A*C*



heavenscentgirl1
April 29, 2013

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The presentation...
...is just beautiful Andy.

I totally feel where you are coming from by sharing the beautiful lyrics within this song that you have so graciously shared with us my dear friend.

The lyrics are so real...and I can feel the pain and understand them so well -- as I sat here listening to them. Thanks so much for sharing this song with us.

- heavenscentgirl1


andycapped
April 29, 2013
(Creator)
I'm glad you understand where I'm coming from. I'm having issues writing, but my emotion still need to be vented. Us poets gotta do what us poets gotta do, right? Thanks for checking it out, HSG1!! ~A*C*



Exxiesheartbreak
April 29, 2013

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I feel
your heart here andy..this is a lovely and very artistic piece.,.spotlight! Exxie/cc


andycapped
April 29, 2013
(Creator)
Sense I'm cursed for words, I'll find a way to release my emotions. Or should I've done what she said to do, just listen? NOT!! Thanks for checking it out, Cc! ~A*C*



DavyE
April 29, 2013

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Chart Topper
Excellent work Andy, this is good enough to grace any music collection. Superb content and arrangement, the tempo changes highlight the story perfectly. SL :-)


andycapped
April 29, 2013
(Creator)
Thank you, DavyE!! Anathema does surely rock!! lol Epically astonding!! Definitely fit my emotional mood swing. Thanks for checking it out. ~A*C*



andrewlondon
April 29, 2013

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Exquisite
This poem was an exquisite exampe of literary passion! It moved me deeply! Thank you for sharing it here!


andycapped
April 29, 2013
(Creator)
"To the songs we reflect upon" This isnt my work, but it fits my emotions firmly. These lyrics are written by, Anathema. A band out of Liverpool, England. Very moving music, huh? Sometimes when we're stuck on life and you cant say it words, music fills the void sometimes. Thanks for checking it out. ~A*C*


andrewlondon
April 30, 2013
Oh, OK. Thanks for clarifying the facts for me. I've never heard of the band Anathema (since I'm mainly into Delta Blues and American Folk), but I will check them out. Thanks for the heads up!



SigDelDai
April 22, 2013

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No Words
In this universe there is nothing comparable to this song/poem. I have never imagined that this all could happen in this site. I am very pleased to listen this song...
The words embedded here is so much embellishing that I could not describe.....
The most impressive line here is

I've never seen a light that's so bright - I've never seen a light that's so bright - I've never seen a light that's so bright

Blinded by the light that's inside - Blinded by the light that's inside

Blinded by the light that's inside you

I had to let you go
To the setting sun

I had to let you go
And find a way back home

You might not trust me... I could not stop the tears be tumbling through my cheeks .... It poured on the heart of mine.....
thank you very much sir....
thank you very much for this....
Always yours........


andycapped
April 22, 2013
(Creator)
No thank you, Sir Sigi! Thanks for taking the time to hear and understand emotion through song. I am nothing but a struggling writer that happens to be struggling at the moment. {Writers Block} I needed to express how I felt at the moment and this song fit to a tee. It expressed exactly how I felt. It surely did its job, it affected her, and many others as well, like yourself. Your feelings surely gave me a early morning smile, I'm glad you enjoyed the experience. Thank you every much for checking it out. ~A*C*


SigDelDai
April 22, 2013
Your suavity shows you, How divine is your soul? How is the atmosphere of your feelings? And How your heart is willing to show the kindness? I am flattered and UNTOUCHABLE is really very close to me. I had listed this song of yours in the list of MY FAVORITE SONGS....... I can imagine your face because my heart always says that "If you are eager to know someones feelings than gaze the character of his/her." I am always with you.....
yours,
SIGI


andycapped
April 22, 2013
(Creator)
The name of the band is, Anathema, if you havent found out yet. Thanks again for the kind words. Ttyl, ~A*C*



Caroline
March 07, 2013

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Spotlight
this is absolutely breathtaking andy..omg..it gave me goosebumps..huggsss hun..I wish you all the best! Cc


andycapped
March 07, 2013
(Creator)
As The World Turns,,,,,,,,Thanks Cc!! Huggggs Dear! ~A*C*



southernbelle
March 06, 2013

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Sadly beautiful...
Andy my friend this is such a sadly beautiful and very heartfelt write that has so much pain and longing deep within as one feels the hurt and love of having to let someone you love go.


andycapped
March 06, 2013
(Creator)
Omg! Its been to long!! I was thinking of you a few weeks ago. I went to your site, It gave me a smile, even if there wasnt any poems there. This piece I posted is a song by, Anathema. I posted the lyrics and the song. It fits my feelings so much. Its sad and beautiful all in one. Theres anther one I'd like to post, but I dont wanna be to cheesy. Its another song by, Anathema and it fits my feeling to a tee. Anyway, thank you for stopping by. I hope you stay awhile. How everything with you, good I hope. Well, thanks again, ttysoon!! <3,~Andy



Lordrevenge
March 05, 2013

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love it
i like it so much. I spent time to read it first then listen to the song. I found that the poem / song is about lost or missing someone dear to you and never letting go of them. I voice is perfect for this song. I think if someones passed then they are always in your heart. its harder to let go.


andycapped
March 05, 2013
(Creator)
Yes, theres many ways of looking at it, my situation is that things greater took over, you love them just the same, but sometimes you gotta let go and hope one day they''ll come back. Im stuck on writers block and the music fulfills my emotional needs. I hope you dont mind. I kind thought the music is fitting enough to post. Thanks for checking it out. ~A*C*



Aspiring_Angel3
March 05, 2013

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This breaks my heart because I know yours is hurting so. I wish my mind was not so frazzled right now my friend, but know that my thoughts are with you. There is always PM ya know. Please take care of you and of course this is a SL! Hugs, Lesa PS presentation was beautiful!!!


andycapped
March 05, 2013
(Creator)
Thank you, Lesa!! Day by day, surgery after surgery, the scares on the heart heal. It's the memories thAT haunt you forever. I still cant let go, not yet. Maybe she'll fly back? Thanks for checking out this heartsong. ~A*C*


Aspiring_Angel3
April 30, 2013
Andy I had to come back to this one, and it is so good to see you and it, shining top of the SL list. This is as touching as it was the first time that I read it, and in the today perhaps touches a little deeper still. Beautiful work my friend. It will not let me SL again or I surely would give it another. Blessings, Lesa


andycapped
April 30, 2013
(Creator)
Thank you again, Lesa!! It is an epic piece of music, huh? Hope you're enjoying the day. Ttysoon,,,~A*C*



elfqueena
March 04, 2013

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:{}
this was sad but beautiful too and worthy of you thats all I am going to say except I loved it


andycapped
March 04, 2013
(Creator)
Thanks for understanding me. Im lost for words and the music says it all. I love you, Sharon!!! Thank you for checking out the song. ~A*C*



josiechambers3
March 04, 2013

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Oh. My. God.
This is just...so...good. You really overdid it with the pics and font and such, but I love it! You're the first I've seen do that.


andycapped
March 04, 2013
(Creator)
I always used pics, but no backgrounds. I never knew how too, till I met the Beautiful Master of Poetic Artistic Everafter, Aspiring Angel3. She is the master designer. Black is my first background, lol I like it. lol Thanks for checking it out. ~A*C*


josiechambers3
March 04, 2013
Welcome! Can't wait to check out your profile!


andycapped
March 04, 2013
(Creator)
Help urself to my profile and enjoy the archieve. ~A*C*.


josiechambers3
March 04, 2013
oh, I will. hehehe



insanewriter
March 04, 2013

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never die
always shine! blinded inside. I had to. I had to. I had to rate this poem 5 stars
never die always shine!


andycapped
March 04, 2013
(Creator)
My heart says I do it, so I does it. On the Roller Coaster of life we win, we lose, we sometimes live on. Thanks for checking out this beautiful song. ~A*C*



 
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