A Poem by MJMitchell


Author: MJMitchell
Created: March 26, 2013 at 02:27 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Spiritual | Inspirational | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 110 views

Communion  

I hear Your voice,
A whisper, strong and clear.
Never forsaken
Am I.

I see Your face, in
The abounding beauty of natural settings,
The wrinkled face of an elder,
The chubby feet of a toddler,
The clarity of good music,
The surf, the wind, the sea,
Sun rays, moon glow.

I taste the wine of Your blood,
Eat the bread of Your body,
Close my eyes,
Hear your voice,
And see Your face.


© MJMitchell - all rights reserved


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JoanDZombie2RC
May 19, 2017
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Communion is a good way to be spiritual...it really makes you think about everything...an it makes you think about our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ who died for us!!
Your
Friend
Joan
(who is currently dead)


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failte
March 26, 2013
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This may sound a little
like sacrilege but I almost feel like this could have been written by God to us sinners here below. I think that He sees each of us in all things - the toddler, the elder, and all the other of His creations. We are part of the ALL. There is much love, tenderness and inspriration in these words of yours. A shared kinship with our Maker. Your spirituality is showing and it looks very good on you. You might like my recent Easter poem -His Only Son. Beautifully rendered and well worth the SL. Sarah


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angeltakeflight
March 26, 2013
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indeed
hello this is the poetess/barbara...this is a very nice penn indeed, and I like it very much. for he is The Great I Am, the All in All, He is All that Holds our Souls. He is The Lord. and to be well Praised. Communion is a special time to be taken seriously on a spiritual matter for he died for us .He did not deserve the torture he took, but we did,he did that to save a sinner like me.,to set the soul free to heaven, if they choose to serve him..byebye


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