A Poem by MJMitchell

Author: MJMitchell
Created: April 05, 2013 at 12:03 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Haiku | Family | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 222 views

To Mommy  

I am not yet born.
I float within warm waters.
I wait with patience.

I grow within you.
I am your new indulgence,
Nurtured by your soul.

My body and mind
Are shaped and molded with love
From your own spirit.

I wait eagerly
For you to beckon me forth
Into my new world.

I hope you love me
As much as I love you now
For giving me life.

Shall we serve The Lord
Together as family?
God made us for that.

© MJMitchell - all rights reserved

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May 19, 2017
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This is adorable! I love how the baby cant talk but you give it a voice!! I love that you love the Lord makes me happy to be in Christ with you!!
Joan (who is currently dead)

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November 29, 2013
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loved it!!!!
i'm new to haiku and i must say i'm enjoying it. good job and God bless

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