A Poem by DemeraraLady


Author: DemeraraLady
Created: April 07, 2013 at 01:51 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 393 views

I Envy Your Freedom  

My words and my voice travel into space
In my dreams,
Even when I am awake

My soul move like a slow moving cloud
On a hot sunny day
The internet has allow me to see your valleys,
Your hills, homes, mountains and your exotic flowers

Your cultures and diversity
Is worth fostering
I am always going to be there with you:

I
Envy your freedom
But will cherish your kindness,

For me it's ways to get a natural high
Dancing In your dazzling flowers fields or
Walking your sandy beaches,
I am a clingy leech to poetry
A poet who’s always in high spirit
That’s me!
Enjoying the breeze and the view
From my Internet explorer




Last Modified: April 07, 2013 at 02:11 pm
© DemeraraLady - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



darkelegy
June 09, 2013
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Nicely done...
Nice imagery here...as your muse successfully delivers the message...loved it and I liked this part-Dancing In your dazzling flowers fields or
Walking your sandy beaches,
I am a clingy leech to poetry ...well done and thank you for sharing this one to us...keep's on!



(Author)
Thank you for being so kind to my work

 DemeraraLady replied on June 09, 2013




Nikkiluvzu
April 07, 2013
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Very lovely write



(Author)
Thank you for commenting Nikkiluvzu.. sorry for being so late with this reply

 DemeraraLady replied on June 09, 2013




terrygodwin
April 07, 2013
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Good
A well presented piece of prose.



(Author)
Thank you terrygodwin, but i am sorry for the late reply

 DemeraraLady replied on June 09, 2013




hobopoet
April 07, 2013
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Clever
You are one with it all dear lady. hobo

s/l



(Author)
Thank you hobopoet.. and i am once again sorry for my late reply

 DemeraraLady replied on June 09, 2013




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