A Poem by poetcook


Author: poetcook
Created: July 09, 2013 at 11:46 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 3.5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 94 views

If I Could Put A Smile  

I wish I could put a smile upon the whole world face
I wish I could put a smile upon every child , mother, father and son.
I wish I could put a smile upon everything God created in the world but there is no more smile no more all the smiles are gone people have forgotten how to enjoy life.
I remember the time when my mother use to dance and she would jump so high and she would click her heels and she would laugh but those days are gone , those days are gone.
I'm gonna dance and dance I'm gonna turn this town upside down we gonna drink until we fall out, were gonna make love until there's no more to give, we gonna enjoy every moments, every minutes and every seconds of life until God take away our breath.
We shall be as one loving, hugging, kissing and touching each other forever and ever in harmony we shall get lost in love and kisses.


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umaldrin
July 10, 2013
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This so powerful, tells us about something that we want to see right now... a smile
A smile that leads us to another good thing, anothet good things in our lives.
This is only my suggestion, maybe if you make this poem more poetic again, maybe this would be much more beautiful again, keep on writing! Well done


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EPICWRITER21
July 10, 2013
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Good job view mmy site andread my storiesanyway this was good well done.


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