A Poem by KnightNiko


Author: KnightNiko
Created: April 27, 2014 at 02:49 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Dark | Personal
Upload Stats: 4.62 Stars by 4 users with 6 comments and 183 views

Confusion  

I'm not sure how I ended up here.
one day I was fine then the next, I was completely vulnerable to my own thoughts.
I have no idea who I really am. A part of me is missing.
All the mind games and hallucinations control every being of me.
I can see right through, there is a dark hole and I am falling deeper and deeper into misery.
Some days are fine, but I can never tell which ones are mine.

Please, don't push me away like you are afraid. No one knows me better than you do.
All the memories of you, fade as I get confused.
are you really there?


© KnightNiko - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



demon_love
July 11, 2014
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This poem caught me from the beginning. I found it very sad but beautiful as well. I think it was wonderfully written and as I read I felt a sense of confusion and emotional pain. I think you are an amazing writer and you express the darkness so beautifully it almost makes it seem not so bad. Thank you for sharing.

Keep writing,
demon_love


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philip19
April 29, 2014
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Depression or a failure to grasp life's reallity-a sad poem about a state of mind that needs help-that needs a friend.


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Zenlin
April 28, 2014
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Good poem
What you're actually describing is alzheimers or dementia. But as for the dark aspect, this is very good. It could be the results of a curse or spell.


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Audie
April 28, 2014
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Perfect!! ~


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a112yearoldman
April 27, 2014
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A sort of night flight
I used to experience. Fantasy and reality - which is which? And does it really make any difference??


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kitty
April 27, 2014
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Reverse psychology...
.. needed here my knight in distress. You need a damsel fair to let down her hair and rescue you - from the mire and relish your heart's desire. Fare thee well there's loads out there who'll take up this challenge deep and then your heart in safety keep!


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