A Poem by Trudawn


Author: Trudawn
Created: June 16, 2014 at 12:00 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 194 views

Opportunity  

Opportunity
is knocking,
everywhere I look

I have so
many new ideas,

I can't believe
my luck. .

Is this truly
happening ?

It feels like
a dream

I'm finally
getting this
opportunity

A goal,

becoming
a reality,

My life is
looking up

My smile
is as wide
as can be.

Wow life has
finally decided
to take a chance
on me.

So here
is hoping,

wish me
Good luck.


Last Modified: November 25, 2014 at 02:16 pm
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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



SPaddington
June 21, 2014
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Your poem has a good flow and is written well. However, when I read it I didn't really feel any emotion. I enjoyed reading it, and understand your point but I think it should address more people. After all, how many people do not have any choice. I enjoyed reading your poem. I think your poem shows insight.



(Author)
Thank you for your comments much appreciated
Take care Trudawn x

 Trudawn replied on June 25, 2014




Sun_of_Heaven
June 17, 2014
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I like it
you took the word opportunity and expressed it with personal experience, rhythm and message... this expresses also on a deeper level when opportunity is there it may never come again in such a way as the present, and if we take advantage of them we can reach the sky and this surely gives us a new purpose and adventure in life which is filled with endless excitement and speechless joys.... I enjoyed this, thank you for posting



(Author)
Thank you so much for your kind review and
taking the time to leave your comments
Much appreciated take care Trudawn x

 Trudawn replied on June 18, 2014




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