A Poem by DevDutta


Author: DevDutta
Created: June 28, 2014 at 07:40 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Sad | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.8 Stars by 5 users with 8 comments and 215 views

I wrote this for you  

There is no room in my life for feeling sorry for myself,
My fearful past causes a fearful present.
I'm tired of hurting me for things that aren't my fault,
A chill always runs up through my spine
It crawls into my brain,
The freezing touch of fear.

Some days I think I should just tell you,
Some days I'm sick of it.
I want to cry, want to scream
I want to tell you mostly.
The feelings are deep and real,
It's driving me insane.

I just want to escape those horrid feelings,
To escape myself, so there was
no pain, no fear, no ugliness.
I'm tired of wanting something I can't have,
I guess that's why my wishes never come true,
I have learned that sometimes "sorry" is not enough.

The words are all gone, the time's been too long,
Funny though how you never once said sorry for hurting me,
I stand here within this huge hole,
Under the full moon's ghostly light.
The funny thing is that,
You don't even know, I wrote this for you.


© DevDutta - all rights reserved

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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)



demon_love
July 13, 2014
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Beautiful and heartfelt poetry, that is what you have penned here. I think that you have done an amazing job with this and I love the truth and passion you add to all your writing. Thank you for sharing.

Keep writing,
demon_love


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sillentluver
June 29, 2014
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Yep....
I can connect with this far more than my words can express. Perhaps the other hurts just as much. Silence always leaves you wondering and hurts even more. Sad but beautiful feeling write. I'm sure you wrote this on soggy paper.



(Author)
Your words are my strength. Your presence To me, “FEARLESS” thank you for your sweet words and nice reviews.

 DevDutta replied on June 29, 2014




loverofpoetry7
June 29, 2014
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Very deep and heartfelt writing here. I could feel the pain all the way through. The last line, "You don't even know, I wrote this for you" really hit me the most. How many times have we written poems for people who have no idea they were even written. I know I have done my share. You have written this piece beautifully, great job. ~Shannan



(Author)
Thank you for such sweet words and for the honor of you stopping by my way.

 DevDutta replied on June 29, 2014




failte
June 28, 2014
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I suppose that there
are many written works meant for special people that never, ever find it out. I wrote a special one for my husband. He asked me to have it framed and it still hangs in our bedroom. He also asked that it be in his hand when he cremated. He died last year but that was done as well. I've written many about him since and pretend that he is watching over my shoulder while I write. Sad and melancholy but an honest depiction of your state of mind with writing. Well done. Sarah



(Author)
You humble me with your words. I am honored to receive such kind touching words for my write. i appreciate this. Thank you very much for taking time for me.

 DevDutta replied on June 29, 2014




LonelyKingJames
June 28, 2014
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This is a very heartfelt write,very personal for you too it seems. The pain of someone close hurting us can cut very deep indeed,my friend. Nice work,I really felt the words meant something and held some weight.
~LKJ~



(Author)
You humble me with your words. I am honored to receive such kind touching words for my write. Thank you very much for taking time for me.

 DevDutta replied on June 29, 2014




Trudawn
June 28, 2014
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deep
Another beautiful poem this one touched me deep the feelings
and emotions from this piece connected to how I'm feeling of
late thank you for this poem and conveying something I cud not find
the right words to say. Keep writing take care Trudawn x



(Author)
Thank you very very much for such sweet words and for the honor of you stopping by my way.

 DevDutta replied on June 29, 2014


Your welcome keep writing trux

 Trudawn replied on June 29, 2014




EltonCamp
June 28, 2014
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This is well written and shows a lot of frustration and anguish. Good job! Elton



(Author)
Thank you for such sweet words and for the honor of you stopping by my way.

 DevDutta replied on June 28, 2014




kitty
June 28, 2014
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Unaware of any 'hurt' ...
... caused I am sure. Your character, that is. Best to hear both sides of any story. From the outside looking in! Nice to have someone 'create' a piece specially for you. Shows how much they do care. Good to let your innermost feelings be known otherwise 'love' is wasted! Thank you for sharing these feelings>



(Author)
You are always special to me. Your presence gives me hope & strength to fight. Thank you for reading. Truly do appreciate it.

 DevDutta replied on June 28, 2014




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